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MsCaroline
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PostSubject: BEFORE THE LAST BELLS TOLLS   BEFORE THE LAST BELLS TOLLS EmptySun May 27, 2012 1:38 pm

BEFORE THE LAST BELL TOLLS

There will be a time of wonder
Just waiting there for you and me
A time so deep within to ponder
That some may not want to see.

A time when you may be there standing
On the street within a crowd
When some are gone in light's first flashing
Those left behind now cry so loud.

A time when fears will soon surround them
And their eyes in wonder gaze,
A world destined to constant mayhem,
War and chaos, it displays.

Where all the good on Earth are taken
And those left have no belief,
Pray their Hearts will now awaken
So that they...may find relief.

Violent years of terror given
All that is lost...you can regain.
Learn the map that leads to Heaven
And it's blessings you can attain.

All that are lost...will then be driven
To rethink their neutered goals
As their thoughts no longer hidden
Change... before the last bell tolls.......

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PostSubject: Re: BEFORE THE LAST BELLS TOLLS   BEFORE THE LAST BELLS TOLLS EmptySun May 27, 2012 1:57 pm

Your work is so gripping, and the ending sure packs a punch. Nice work!

All that are lost...will then be driven
To rethink their neutered goals
As their thoughts no longer hidden
Change... before the last bell tolls.......
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MsCaroline
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PostSubject: Re: BEFORE THE LAST BELLS TOLLS   BEFORE THE LAST BELLS TOLLS EmptySun May 27, 2012 4:34 pm

you should see the video that a friend of mine made to go with it. The impact is almost scarey.

http://www.openmyeyeslord.net/Before The Last Bell Tolls.exe
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PostSubject: Re: BEFORE THE LAST BELLS TOLLS   BEFORE THE LAST BELLS TOLLS EmptySun May 27, 2012 4:53 pm

Such an important message. I pray each day to be worthy to escape the wrath that is to come.

The time for that last bell gets closer and closer.


So glad you are here!
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PostSubject: Re: BEFORE THE LAST BELLS TOLLS   BEFORE THE LAST BELLS TOLLS EmptyWed May 30, 2012 8:01 am

I absolutely love it! I never could hear God until I learned to fear God. Word.
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PostSubject: Re: BEFORE THE LAST BELLS TOLLS   BEFORE THE LAST BELLS TOLLS EmptyWed May 30, 2012 9:48 am

It is so important for us to be lights in this dark world. Jesus wanted us to be fishers of men. Very important message.
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