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oneagleswings ADMIN II
CCW GOLD MEMBER CCW SUPPORTER 2X POETRY CONTEST WINNER Posts : 4323 Age : 64 Join date : 2011-08-30 Location : south carolina
| Subject: A candle flickers but does not go out (w/audio) Mon May 28, 2012 7:46 pm | |
| A lamp is drawn from under a bed the world groans it's disapproval as it is placed upon a stand and illuminates the room Peace and calm resume not before he singes his hand
A full moon nests upon a tree at least that's how it seems to me strike a match light a fuse who will take the bumpy road with me? they await the nitro to clear rocks to build a bridge
Headlights blare into a rainy night finally heading home for the first time read the directions right
Exhausted, relieved, lost in thought found a Way through the dark
She left the floodlights on i sit outside in the driveway meditate on the Blessings You've showered upon me
Please forgive me for wondering if this is just a dream? i never saw this coming it is beyond my wildest imagination
"No one knows the hour"
It's been a long week, I really must go inside to bathe but not before... taking a moment to give thanks and praise taking nothing for granted under moonlight's glow basking in a SON shower
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JoeT SCRIBE (101-150posts)
CCW SUPPORTER Posts : 107 Age : 65 Join date : 2012-02-08 Location : Surrey BC
| Subject: Re: A candle flickers but does not go out (w/audio) Mon May 28, 2012 8:34 pm | |
| Oneagleswings, even flickering your gifts that God gives are bright This line reminds me of camping trips in the night, not a wise chose And spiritually finding the way... again.
finally heading home for the first time read the directions right
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oneagleswings ADMIN II
CCW GOLD MEMBER CCW SUPPORTER 2X POETRY CONTEST WINNER Posts : 4323 Age : 64 Join date : 2011-08-30 Location : south carolina
| Subject: Re: A candle flickers but does not go out (w/audio) Mon May 28, 2012 9:35 pm | |
| You are gifted with discernment Joe, night excursions ended years ago. i work strictly days and for years now i'm home every night, i take the Word with me everywhere i go. One can get 'home' and still not be home, now i am always 'home' regardless of physical location but i had a lot of help with that. |
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rhymarhyma WRITERS’ MENTOR (500 + posts)
Posts : 549 Join date : 2011-08-11 Location : Denver, CO
| Subject: Re: A candle flickers but does not go out (w/audio) Wed May 30, 2012 8:04 am | |
| My man! Always a great read with your work, Anthony. No doubt. |
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redhaley WRITER (51-100 posts)
CCW SUPPORTER Posts : 88 Age : 71 Join date : 2012-03-26 Location : North Carolina, USA
| Subject: Re: A candle flickers but does not go out (w/audio) Wed May 30, 2012 9:44 am | |
| God is good. Very beautiful. |
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oneagleswings ADMIN II
CCW GOLD MEMBER CCW SUPPORTER 2X POETRY CONTEST WINNER Posts : 4323 Age : 64 Join date : 2011-08-30 Location : south carolina
| Subject: Re: A candle flickers but does not go out (w/audio) Thu May 31, 2012 5:41 pm | |
| Sometimes when i return home to the little brick house along a narrow gravel road surrounded by palm and pine trees, i have to stop and take it in awhile. I had never felt so at home in the past, it takes some getting used to. It's been over six years in this serene setting and it still leaves me awestruck and breathless. It's as though i keep waiting for someone to knock on the door and say..."who are you and what are you doing here, what have you done with Anthony?" But when i close my eyes and become very still and quiet inside, allow all questions and doubts to subside, i seem to know without a doubt the Lord has placed me here. Thanks for reading. |
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Thena ADMIN II
CCW GOLD MEMBER CCW SUPPORTER POETRY & SHORT STORY CONTESTS WINNER Posts : 2875 Age : 79 Join date : 2011-09-11 Location : Sunny CA
| Subject: Re: A candle flickers but does not go out (w/audio) Thu May 31, 2012 5:47 pm | |
| My favorite parts:
A lamp is drawn from under a bed the world groans it's disapproval as it is placed upon a stand and illuminates the room Peace and calm resume not before he singes his hand
A full moon nests upon a tree at least that's how it seems to me strike a match light a fuse who will take the bumpy road with me? they await the nitro to clear rocks to build a bridge
Headlights blare into a rainy night finally heading home for the first time read the directions right
Exhausted, relieved, lost in thought found a Way through the dark
She left the floodlights on i sit outside in the driveway meditate on the Blessings You've showered upon me
Please forgive me for wondering if this is just a dream? i never saw this coming it is beyond my wildest imagination
"No one knows the hour"
It's been a long week, can i at least have one more shower?
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God Bless |
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Lora SITE ADMINISTRATOR
Posts : 5907 Age : 53 Join date : 2011-07-26 Location : Southern CA
| Subject: Re: A candle flickers but does not go out (w/audio) Sat Jun 02, 2012 7:30 pm | |
| It starts out strong and ends the same. Couldn't pick my favorite stanza, they all belong together just as they are. The talent oozes out of this one. |
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oneagleswings ADMIN II
CCW GOLD MEMBER CCW SUPPORTER 2X POETRY CONTEST WINNER Posts : 4323 Age : 64 Join date : 2011-08-30 Location : south carolina
| Subject: Re: A candle flickers but does not go out (w/audio) Sun Jun 03, 2012 2:32 pm | |
| Thank you all, i do love my brothers and sisters and appreciate y'all very much. Glory be to God. |
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oneagleswings ADMIN II
CCW GOLD MEMBER CCW SUPPORTER 2X POETRY CONTEST WINNER Posts : 4323 Age : 64 Join date : 2011-08-30 Location : south carolina
| Subject: Re: A candle flickers but does not go out (w/audio) Sun Nov 25, 2012 6:04 pm | |
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