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PostSubject: Can You Hear Me   Can You Hear Me EmptyTue May 29, 2012 3:27 pm

Can you hear me?
I cry, I call, I plead.
Can you hear me?
My pain really is real.
It's undeniable, if only to me.
I can't expect you to understand.
You say you do?
Have you been there?
Describe it, then.
No?
I understand, you're being nice.
No offence, I don't want nice.
I want relief.
Can you hear me?
When I spend all night choking back the feelings
That want to explode to the surface
And make a mockery of that which I try to be
Can you hear me?
Walking in my solitude of loneliness
Hoping the rain of tears will wash me with relief
To be able to have a moment of peace
Away from my internal conflict.
Can you hear me?
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PostSubject: Re: Can You Hear Me   Can You Hear Me EmptyTue May 29, 2012 3:39 pm

i can hear you now.
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PostSubject: Re: Can You Hear Me   Can You Hear Me EmptyTue May 29, 2012 5:16 pm

God hears
No matter what or where
He hears
The tiniest whisper
Of a prayer.
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PostSubject: Re: Can You Hear Me   Can You Hear Me EmptyWed May 30, 2012 12:51 pm

Wow! What a gut wrenching piece. You expressed those feelings superbly. Awesome work. Love it.
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