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cleo574
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PostSubject: Can You Do It?   Can You Do It? EmptyTue Jun 19, 2012 12:46 am

My heart overflows with the things I see and feel,
The death of a loved one can make your emotions reel,
The laugh of a child who is happy and well
Can make your heart happy and emotions swell.

A friend or loved one who is sick or in pain
Can make you want to hug them to help them stay sane.
When you hear of people being killed for no reason
It makes you wonder if it’s the killing season.

You think that one person can’t change anything
But a heart can make a difference in everything.
God can take the hurt away and help you live again
And He can change the world through you if you just let Him.

When you see some baby kittens playing without a care
You want to pick them up and hold them to let them know you’re there.
That’s the way God feels about us each and every one
He just wants us to know that He is there for the long run.

Our world is only a tiny part of God’s vast domain
But still he knows us each by name.
He knows all about us what we think and do
He’s out there just waiting for you.

He can turn your life around
When sometimes its upside down.
Don’t be afraid to answer His call
He won’t let you down or let you fall.

God is there for you whether you want Him or not,
If you read your Bible, He could teach you a lot.
The more He gives you, the more He expects back,
If you are truly His servant, you will never lack.

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PostSubject: Re: Can You Do It?   Can You Do It? EmptyTue Jun 19, 2012 10:13 am

Our world is only a tiny part of God’s vast domain
But still he knows us each by name.


My favorite part. How wonderful to know that God knows our name and knew us before the earth was formed.
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PostSubject: Re: Can You Do It?   Can You Do It? EmptyTue Jun 19, 2012 11:32 am

AWESOME!
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PostSubject: Re: Can You Do It?   Can You Do It? EmptyTue Jun 19, 2012 4:22 pm

Beautiful work and exceptional message. You're getting a little more free with your writing. I love it!
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PostSubject: Re: Can You Do It?   Can You Do It? EmptyTue Jun 19, 2012 6:39 pm

Thanks you guys. You are the best!
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PostSubject: Re: Can You Do It?   Can You Do It? EmptyWed Jun 20, 2012 9:03 am

I think it's absolutely beautiful. Word.
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