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PostSubject: Inspirational and Faith Poetry   Inspirational and Faith Poetry EmptySat Jul 14, 2012 12:47 pm

This morning I open the book, asking creator to let me see
He had guided me into the pages of Ecclesiastes
So this is what I am to tell those who you desire to be free
Yes my son, they all need to see it’s just their vanity including thee

Who was I trying to pretend reading then, the value of a friend
Smiling within just then, realizing this is His message to send
Yes, injustices around the world always seems to prevail
Then to exist or not exist ask why the sail and wind persist

Thoughts are misread for wisdom’s practicality, actually
The diligence of a man’s duty is the true reality
All those who behave like a collie your will shall lead you to folly
Everything and everyone has there time so bask ye in jolly

They come and they ask before they are told, what is their role
I tell you now as I told them before, ye vanity of toll
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PostSubject: Re: Inspirational and Faith Poetry   Inspirational and Faith Poetry EmptySat Jul 14, 2012 1:26 pm

You have a lot of strong messages in your work. Including this one. They're full of wisdom and practicality, but deliver a punch. Love this stanza.

This morning I open the book, asking creator to let me see
He had guided me into the pages of Ecclesiastes
So this is what I am to tell those who you desire to be free
Yes my son, they all need to see it’s just their vanity including thee
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PostSubject: Re: Inspirational and Faith Poetry   Inspirational and Faith Poetry EmptySat Jul 14, 2012 2:43 pm

Thank you Lora for you gracious comments! I feel blessed to have read them and also inspired to share more words that I have felt compelled to pen. I pray you find them as equally inspiring. Peace and blessings to you.
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