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Posts : 87 Age : 59 Join date : 2012-07-14 Location : Northern Indiana
Subject: Inspirational and Faith Poetry Sat Jul 14, 2012 2:53 pm
Here is a story about another link in the chain About this a man on a heroic campaign Freeing souls is what he desires to obtain Not for his own individual personal gain May his words not be spoken to you vain Falling upon each of these pages like rain Hoping to nourish this ground full of grain Now keep ye reading as I further explain I am just trying to create a world that is humane Even though others crave a different type of domain All they every want to do is complain Like a match thrown in with pit of butane It is the world the want to inflame For the evil ones own personal gain While they sit and drink their champagne Believing they alone are destined the reign By trying to control you and your brain It’s really your soul they trying to contain They are the ones whom should abstain But their greed drives all them to maintain The false rule they hold in this domain Out of greed they all want to obtain Our thoughts are what they try to constrain Knowing we all have free rein Yet they still try and stop the freight train Constantly the people they arraign That is what is truly insane Feeding us lies hid inside our chow mein It’s that noodle that we call a brain Which kindles the power of ye arcane This is why they have their disdain Considering the people that they have slain Soon they will start again to detain Then inflict on all with their undying pain Driving us all down this damn drain But their will be those who fight to refrain His word has made them all ordained Humanity your will, will sustain Seeing this is easy for you the mundane The world shall soon be yours to regain
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Posts : 5907 Age : 53 Join date : 2011-07-26 Location : Southern CA
I clicked, I saw, and I was amazed. How you managed to use the same rhyme throughout the entire poem is beyond me. You also managed to make it hard hitting, full of life, and forceful. Nice work.