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PostSubject: Inspirational and Faith Poetry   Inspirational and Faith Poetry EmptySat Jul 14, 2012 2:53 pm

Here is a story about another link in the chain
About this a man on a heroic campaign
Freeing souls is what he desires to obtain
Not for his own individual personal gain
May his words not be spoken to you vain
Falling upon each of these pages like rain
Hoping to nourish this ground full of grain
Now keep ye reading as I further explain
I am just trying to create a world that is humane
Even though others crave a different type of domain
All they every want to do is complain
Like a match thrown in with pit of butane
It is the world the want to inflame
For the evil ones own personal gain
While they sit and drink their champagne
Believing they alone are destined the reign
By trying to control you and your brain
It’s really your soul they trying to contain
They are the ones whom should abstain
But their greed drives all them to maintain
The false rule they hold in this domain
Out of greed they all want to obtain
Our thoughts are what they try to constrain
Knowing we all have free rein
Yet they still try and stop the freight train
Constantly the people they arraign
That is what is truly insane
Feeding us lies hid inside our chow mein
It’s that noodle that we call a brain
Which kindles the power of ye arcane
This is why they have their disdain
Considering the people that they have slain
Soon they will start again to detain
Then inflict on all with their undying pain
Driving us all down this damn drain
But their will be those who fight to refrain
His word has made them all ordained
Humanity your will, will sustain
Seeing this is easy for you the mundane
The world shall soon be yours to regain
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PostSubject: Re: Inspirational and Faith Poetry   Inspirational and Faith Poetry EmptyMon Jul 16, 2012 2:13 pm

I clicked, I saw, and I was amazed. How you managed to use the same rhyme throughout the entire poem is beyond me. You also managed to make it hard hitting, full of life, and forceful. Nice work.
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