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CCW GOLD MEMBER CCW SUPPORTER POETRY & SHORT STORY CONTESTS WINNER Posts : 2875 Age : 79 Join date : 2011-09-11 Location : Sunny CA
Subject: I Saw You Smile Sun Sep 11, 2011 12:24 pm
I saw you smile today A sweet smile when you glanced my way Even though how much I needed it you didn't know Unless God told you so And caused you to smile a smile Which I would see And which would mean so much to me. I saw you smile today And it caused me to smile as well And others may have needed that smile That I sent their way And it may have been multiplied All throughout the day. Thena Cullen Smith
Lora SITE ADMINISTRATOR
Posts : 5907 Age : 53 Join date : 2011-07-26 Location : Southern CA
Subject: Re: I Saw You Smile Sun Sep 11, 2011 12:38 pm
Your work is so beautiful. You said it was simple in your introduction, but I think it has the simplicity of Jesus. His truth is so simple, yet people have so much trouble discovering it.
Thena ADMIN II
CCW GOLD MEMBER CCW SUPPORTER POETRY & SHORT STORY CONTESTS WINNER Posts : 2875 Age : 79 Join date : 2011-09-11 Location : Sunny CA
Subject: Re: I Saw You Smile Sun Sep 11, 2011 12:41 pm
Thank you Lora. I hesitated to share when I saw the depth of other people's work and mine is all so simple.
Lora SITE ADMINISTRATOR
Posts : 5907 Age : 53 Join date : 2011-07-26 Location : Southern CA
Subject: Re: I Saw You Smile Sun Sep 11, 2011 12:58 pm
Us artists are oh so insecure. I don't think your work is as simple as you may think. I think the messages in it are food for the soul. They are each like little blooming flowers releasing the fragrance of Jesus.
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Thena ADMIN II
CCW GOLD MEMBER CCW SUPPORTER POETRY & SHORT STORY CONTESTS WINNER Posts : 2875 Age : 79 Join date : 2011-09-11 Location : Sunny CA
Subject: Re: I Saw You Smile Sun Sep 11, 2011 1:00 pm