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 I Saw You Smile

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PostSubject: I Saw You Smile   I Saw You Smile EmptySun Sep 11, 2011 12:24 pm


I saw you smile today
A sweet smile when you glanced my way
Even though how much I needed it
you didn't know
Unless God told you so
And caused you to smile a smile
Which I would see
And which would mean so much to me.
I saw you smile today
And it caused me to smile as well
And others may have needed that smile
That I sent their way
And it may have been multiplied
All throughout the day.
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PostSubject: Re: I Saw You Smile   I Saw You Smile EmptySun Sep 11, 2011 12:38 pm

Your work is so beautiful. You said it was simple in your introduction, but I think it has the simplicity of Jesus. His truth is so simple, yet people have so much trouble discovering it.
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PostSubject: Re: I Saw You Smile   I Saw You Smile EmptySun Sep 11, 2011 12:41 pm

Thank you Lora. I hesitated to share when I saw the depth of other people's work and mine is all so simple.
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PostSubject: Re: I Saw You Smile   I Saw You Smile EmptySun Sep 11, 2011 12:58 pm

Us artists are oh so insecure. I don't think your work is as simple as you may think. I think the messages in it are food for the soul. They are each like little blooming flowers releasing the fragrance of Jesus.


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PostSubject: Re: I Saw You Smile   I Saw You Smile EmptySun Sep 11, 2011 1:00 pm

Aw, Lora, that made me all teary! Thank you!
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