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Malakhim
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PostSubject: A collection of my small pieces   A collection of my small pieces EmptyWed Aug 29, 2012 10:12 pm

Some of these may get expanded upon, but most are done where they are! Jesus Cross

"Behold! The Bride of Christ
Betrothed in a beautiful white
Bearing a ring that cost Him His life"

"They say great minds think alike
im here to tell you its simpler than that
great minds think alive
if you think dead
you need to breathe in life"

"Dear God its been so long since ive heard you speak
I cant keep my tongue behind my teeth
I scream out to him with a vie for attention!
To my surprise....He listened"

"You catch your bad dreams with a circle and strings, my faith lies in a ressurected King"

"Woe is me I am ruined
not because ive stumbled and fallen
but humbled before God's children
I came from a society where faith isnt shown
Into one where they rely on faith alone
ive dropped to my knees and cried
upon full realization of why Christ died
although my body's been with me until this very day
I left my heart in Nicaragua and there it will stay"

"Ive swallowed the ashes and devoured the scroll
Ive accepted the fact im not on my own
Im the kisser and the killer
But the relationship I have is not of this world"

"Therefore I tell you, what I state isn't a message of hate, but of a deeper love instead
if you talk the talk but don't take up your cross your soul is practically dead,
have you not heard theres a difference between having Christ in your heart and having him 18 inches away in your head?
Your profile and necklace say youre a christian
but scripturally you're nothing close,
last time I checked We shouldnt cuss, get drunk, smoke, or unbalance our yokes
so stop using God as your sin's scapegoat
then sit in your pew on Sundays and boast
when it's you lacking The Father, The Son, and The Holy Ghost!
If you're lukewarm you're going to be spit out of his mouth, stop being a fan, become a follower, and begin to lead for your father."

" Brother, are you one of The boys who talk about their "old me" when in reality, the only difference in their new me is erasing their internet's history?
Im not calling you out
im trying to be a friend
this conviction you're feeling is God pulling, ripping, tearing you from sin!
but you're still a boy and not yet one of the men
treating women like objects and not like a daughter
you post statuses about it but what do you change?
All that's left is the hollow hearted feeling you get after you :censored: (act of completing lust, starts with an m)
theres more to life, theres more to this!
What part of "He Died for you" have you missed?!
Tie this around your neck, You. Are. Better. Than. This!"

"You see, we're the kisser and the killer
The first born to Adam and Eve was sin
we are the children of sin
This is why we must be born again
when Christ calls a man he bids him come and die
but you're to busy wasting your lives to see life.
drowning in sin
drowning in sorrow
with God by your side you could be walking on water
There's a million excuses but none of them viable
you've been living Jersey Shore instead of reading your Bible
your Babylonian heart wants to build your pride high, living to die
With Christ you'll be dying to live
If Even the vile Saul can be saved, then surely there is hope for us all
First came the fall, here comes the finisher
The Church is His bride, and his grace has kissed her!
Abba Father you're so close
Abba Father take us home."

"On twelve, twenty seven of ninety three A war was waged on my soul
My body is a battleground, and my heart is it's goal
truth be told i was a sinful victim torn apart from within
for whom will I fight for, where do I begin?
and to my father, I stand, confess, and rebuke my every sin
Baptized in water and grace drown my soul
now I know by whom I stand when im 6 feet in a hole.. "

"Sultry smile with lavish lips she sings her siren's song
hoping be the stumbling block for any weary man to come along
for alone we are susceptible to the melody she murmers
but together we can protect each other from satan's sneaky murderers"

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Lora
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I love your style. It's very diverse. And, I especially love the way you don't hold back, not afraid to tell the cold hard truth. It adds a lot of passion to your work.
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i read this as one cohesive piece, somehow it works for me!
i had to mentally rearrange it after reading it again and again.
it seemed out of sequence but otherwise very complete and well thought out, with a very strong and honest message that i could relate to and appreciate based on my own past experiences and delivery by Grace from those behaviors.
Keep up the good fight!
i would hope to encourage you to keep writing!
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You continue to blow me away. Blessings
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