Malakhim WRITER (51-100 posts)
2X POETRY CONTEST WINNER Posts : 75 Age : 30 Join date : 2012-08-25 Location : Texas
| Subject: "Joy" Sun Aug 26, 2012 7:16 pm | |
| Her name is Joy but as of late she doesnt seem so joyful With each guy who sees her body as a toy she getting less hopeful Her home life isnt a whole life because she lives in a closet The closest thing to closure she has is the razor she keeps like a locket deep in her pocket... the scars on her body are as numerous as the stars in the sky shes alive but shes not living and she wishes she would die with every nick of the skin her veins run slowly barren It's a pressing matter when one's life depends on her accuracy with a blade she bleeds her hope out her wrist where she hides her heart as she fights a war that none would enlist One last time she gives her veins a kiss with the razor as she lay on the floor bleeding her life is fleeting and her vision begins receding In still silent ringing she hears not a voice but a whisper... "What are you doing here, I have so much on store for you, but you cant hear me because you've barricaded your hearts doors I Love you It doesnt have to be this way I Love you! Let me in...I Love you"
With a wind that flowed with a current to her heart She unlocked the door and let Him in A fire from heaven fell on her cuts and scars With a overwhelming presence her sadness became her name God's love is universal He did it for me He did it for Joy He can do it for you Pray. |
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oneagleswings ADMIN II
CCW GOLD MEMBER CCW SUPPORTER 2X POETRY CONTEST WINNER Posts : 4323 Age : 64 Join date : 2011-08-30 Location : south carolina
| Subject: Re: "Joy" Wed Aug 29, 2012 4:09 pm | |
| "With a overwhelming presence her sadness became her name" God can bring joy even to..."JOY!" AMEN!
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Thena ADMIN II
CCW GOLD MEMBER CCW SUPPORTER POETRY & SHORT STORY CONTESTS WINNER Posts : 2875 Age : 79 Join date : 2011-09-11 Location : Sunny CA
| Subject: Re: "Joy" Wed Aug 29, 2012 4:24 pm | |
| I know a mother who would love to read this...may I share it with her? |
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Malakhim WRITER (51-100 posts)
2X POETRY CONTEST WINNER Posts : 75 Age : 30 Join date : 2012-08-25 Location : Texas
| Subject: Re: "Joy" Wed Aug 29, 2012 9:43 pm | |
| of course! |
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vinedresser WORDSMITH (251-300 posts)
Posts : 259 Age : 68 Join date : 2011-10-10 Location : Arkansas
| Subject: Re: "Joy" Fri Aug 31, 2012 1:56 pm | |
| wow is all I can say, all the way through this I saw people I know just like this. Awesome piece of work, keep it up. |
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Malakhim WRITER (51-100 posts)
2X POETRY CONTEST WINNER Posts : 75 Age : 30 Join date : 2012-08-25 Location : Texas
| Subject: Re: "Joy" Tue Sep 04, 2012 11:30 am | |
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Lora SITE ADMINISTRATOR
Posts : 5907 Age : 53 Join date : 2011-07-26 Location : Southern CA
| Subject: Re: "Joy" Sun Sep 16, 2012 12:32 pm | |
| I'm with Carl...Wow! I love your bravery to present a topic like this. This practice of cutting is more common than many may know. Kids are dying to just feel something. You really touched my heart with this one. Very nice work! |
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