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Thena ADMIN II
CCW GOLD MEMBER CCW SUPPORTER POETRY & SHORT STORY CONTESTS WINNER Posts : 2875 Age : 79 Join date : 2011-09-11 Location : Sunny CA
| Subject: I Wish I Were Smart Mon Sep 17, 2012 12:42 pm | |
| I wish I were as smart as I wish I could be As brilliant as I would like- As bright as the bulb that lights up the room When the sun hides out for the night.
I wish I were wise as I wish I were With wisdom to daily share I wish my wisdom would be so evident That evil would have to beware.
I wish that God would see in me The prayers that are deep in my heart And answer those prayers and create in me The person He meant me to be from the start. Thena Cullen Smith |
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oneagleswings ADMIN II
CCW GOLD MEMBER CCW SUPPORTER 2X POETRY CONTEST WINNER Posts : 4323 Age : 64 Join date : 2011-08-30 Location : south carolina
| Subject: Re: I Wish I Were Smart Tue Sep 18, 2012 3:09 pm | |
| Wait...you're not "smart?", well go figure!
I only wish, i could be more like you. |
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Lora SITE ADMINISTRATOR
Posts : 5907 Age : 53 Join date : 2011-07-26 Location : Southern CA
| Subject: Re: I Wish I Were Smart Tue Oct 02, 2012 12:19 am | |
| - oneagleswings wrote:
- Wait...you're not "smart?", well go figure!
I only wish, i could be more like you. Me too! The Lord's wisdom shines brightly through you. |
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oneagleswings ADMIN II
CCW GOLD MEMBER CCW SUPPORTER 2X POETRY CONTEST WINNER Posts : 4323 Age : 64 Join date : 2011-08-30 Location : south carolina
| Subject: Re: I Wish I Were Smart Tue Oct 02, 2012 3:45 am | |
| i could not agree more, i feel privileged to have learned so much from miss thena, particularly when it comes to the heart of subject matters. Btw...let me know when you feel better so's i can take you to task in the 'slam' arena! That is if'n yous' ain't a skeered a lil' ol' me:) |
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vinedresser WORDSMITH (251-300 posts)
Posts : 259 Age : 68 Join date : 2011-10-10 Location : Arkansas
| Subject: Re: I Wish I Were Smart Tue Oct 02, 2012 3:54 am | |
| "I wish my wisdom would be so evident, that evil would have to beware"
I feel, Miss Thena, that it is evident each time you pen something. God's Spirit just seems to radiate from you, even in the light "slam" times. you still got it on Eagle, btw. Blessings |
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oneagleswings ADMIN II
CCW GOLD MEMBER CCW SUPPORTER 2X POETRY CONTEST WINNER Posts : 4323 Age : 64 Join date : 2011-08-30 Location : south carolina
| Subject: Re: I Wish I Were Smart Tue Oct 02, 2012 4:07 am | |
| thas' right...but i can still try can't i? Got some for you too Mr. Carl! Bring Miss Lora with you, you'll need all the help you can get! (he says...while hiding behind dumpster in back of walmart) |
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Lora SITE ADMINISTRATOR
Posts : 5907 Age : 53 Join date : 2011-07-26 Location : Southern CA
| Subject: Re: I Wish I Were Smart Tue Oct 02, 2012 10:52 am | |
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Thena ADMIN II
CCW GOLD MEMBER CCW SUPPORTER POETRY & SHORT STORY CONTESTS WINNER Posts : 2875 Age : 79 Join date : 2011-09-11 Location : Sunny CA
| Subject: Re: I Wish I Were Smart Tue Oct 02, 2012 12:11 pm | |
| I aint a skeered o nobody.......lol I'm starting back to my physical trainer this week and will probably feel plumb sassy before you know it......I will pull you out from behind that dumpster, mister! (Try to say all that without giggling!) |
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oneagleswings ADMIN II
CCW GOLD MEMBER CCW SUPPORTER 2X POETRY CONTEST WINNER Posts : 4323 Age : 64 Join date : 2011-08-30 Location : south carolina
| Subject: Re: I Wish I Were Smart Tue Oct 02, 2012 12:34 pm | |
| ummm...yeah...uh-huh |
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Thena ADMIN II
CCW GOLD MEMBER CCW SUPPORTER POETRY & SHORT STORY CONTESTS WINNER Posts : 2875 Age : 79 Join date : 2011-09-11 Location : Sunny CA
| Subject: Re: I Wish I Were Smart Tue Oct 02, 2012 12:42 pm | |
| Ok, now you did it Betcha wish you had stayed in bed 'Cause I'm gonna bring out the big words And toss them around your head.
Well, maybe not the big words 'Since I can't think of any... But someday I will 'Cause I know very many!
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Thena ADMIN II
CCW GOLD MEMBER CCW SUPPORTER POETRY & SHORT STORY CONTESTS WINNER Posts : 2875 Age : 79 Join date : 2011-09-11 Location : Sunny CA
| Subject: Re: I Wish I Were Smart Tue Oct 02, 2012 12:45 pm | |
| I'm gonna call in Lora and Carl As tag team members 'Cause I'm a bit older And a "delicate flower" That could use A bit more power...
lol |
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Lora SITE ADMINISTRATOR
Posts : 5907 Age : 53 Join date : 2011-07-26 Location : Southern CA
| Subject: Re: I Wish I Were Smart Tue Oct 02, 2012 12:46 pm | |
| Sounds like Miss Thena is gearing up for the new Old-Fashioned words discussion and contest. She's going to kick some keister. |
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Lora SITE ADMINISTRATOR
Posts : 5907 Age : 53 Join date : 2011-07-26 Location : Southern CA
| Subject: Re: I Wish I Were Smart Tue Oct 02, 2012 12:47 pm | |
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oneagleswings ADMIN II
CCW GOLD MEMBER CCW SUPPORTER 2X POETRY CONTEST WINNER Posts : 4323 Age : 64 Join date : 2011-08-30 Location : south carolina
| Subject: Re: I Wish I Were Smart Tue Oct 02, 2012 1:00 pm | |
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Thena ADMIN II
CCW GOLD MEMBER CCW SUPPORTER POETRY & SHORT STORY CONTESTS WINNER Posts : 2875 Age : 79 Join date : 2011-09-11 Location : Sunny CA
| Subject: Re: I Wish I Were Smart Tue Oct 02, 2012 1:05 pm | |
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Thena ADMIN II
CCW GOLD MEMBER CCW SUPPORTER POETRY & SHORT STORY CONTESTS WINNER Posts : 2875 Age : 79 Join date : 2011-09-11 Location : Sunny CA
| Subject: Re: I Wish I Were Smart Tue Oct 02, 2012 1:07 pm | |
| Come on out Eagleswings And toss out a word or two We will bat them back and forth Until the slam is through. |
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oneagleswings ADMIN II
CCW GOLD MEMBER CCW SUPPORTER 2X POETRY CONTEST WINNER Posts : 4323 Age : 64 Join date : 2011-08-30 Location : south carolina
| Subject: Re: I Wish I Were Smart Tue Oct 02, 2012 1:12 pm | |
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Thena ADMIN II
CCW GOLD MEMBER CCW SUPPORTER POETRY & SHORT STORY CONTESTS WINNER Posts : 2875 Age : 79 Join date : 2011-09-11 Location : Sunny CA
| Subject: Re: I Wish I Were Smart Tue Oct 02, 2012 1:38 pm | |
| I'm dancing up and down I'm pacing the floor It's that fellow eaglewings That I'm waiting for Thought I'd toss out a rhyme ANd then maybe a haiku Just to get things going And see what he will do... |
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Thena ADMIN II
CCW GOLD MEMBER CCW SUPPORTER POETRY & SHORT STORY CONTESTS WINNER Posts : 2875 Age : 79 Join date : 2011-09-11 Location : Sunny CA
| Subject: Re: I Wish I Were Smart Tue Oct 02, 2012 1:43 pm | |
| Where is eagleswings Will he not show his face now Patiently we wait for him. |
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oneagleswings ADMIN II
CCW GOLD MEMBER CCW SUPPORTER 2X POETRY CONTEST WINNER Posts : 4323 Age : 64 Join date : 2011-08-30 Location : south carolina
| Subject: Re: I Wish I Were Smart Tue Oct 02, 2012 1:49 pm | |
| All joking aside when i'm through with the three of you you''ll be collaborating on "i wish i were smart" pt.II
Dear Lord... if this is how "iron sharpens iron" i'm praying that you will send an ironing 'bored'
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Thena ADMIN II
CCW GOLD MEMBER CCW SUPPORTER POETRY & SHORT STORY CONTESTS WINNER Posts : 2875 Age : 79 Join date : 2011-09-11 Location : Sunny CA
| Subject: Re: I Wish I Were Smart Tue Oct 02, 2012 1:57 pm | |
| The ironing "bored" Has never been For you will see Each one of us grin As we take your words And throw them back In each of them A poetic attack. We will take your verbs And turn them into a noun While your zingers We turn around. |
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Lora SITE ADMINISTRATOR
Posts : 5907 Age : 53 Join date : 2011-07-26 Location : Southern CA
| Subject: Re: I Wish I Were Smart Tue Oct 02, 2012 1:59 pm | |
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oneagleswings ADMIN II
CCW GOLD MEMBER CCW SUPPORTER 2X POETRY CONTEST WINNER Posts : 4323 Age : 64 Join date : 2011-08-30 Location : south carolina
| Subject: Re: I Wish I Were Smart Tue Oct 02, 2012 2:10 pm | |
| a hamburger roll maybe? you can't have my verbs they're not mine to give and while i'm at it... won't you kindly give me back my rib?
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Thena ADMIN II
CCW GOLD MEMBER CCW SUPPORTER POETRY & SHORT STORY CONTESTS WINNER Posts : 2875 Age : 79 Join date : 2011-09-11 Location : Sunny CA
| Subject: Re: I Wish I Were Smart Tue Oct 02, 2012 2:14 pm | |
| I'm keeping my ribs Every single one And will be ribbing you more and more Before this day is done! Give up now It's not too late And the free time You will appreciate. |
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oneagleswings ADMIN II
CCW GOLD MEMBER CCW SUPPORTER 2X POETRY CONTEST WINNER Posts : 4323 Age : 64 Join date : 2011-08-30 Location : south carolina
| Subject: Re: I Wish I Were Smart Tue Oct 02, 2012 2:27 pm | |
| you're at no loss for words this seems quite clear i thought perhaps in your weakened state i might persevere
seems i may have acted in haste poor dear... i've driven her over the edge now she plays a violin until she turns blue-faced
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Thena ADMIN II
CCW GOLD MEMBER CCW SUPPORTER POETRY & SHORT STORY CONTESTS WINNER Posts : 2875 Age : 79 Join date : 2011-09-11 Location : Sunny CA
| Subject: Re: I Wish I Were Smart Tue Oct 02, 2012 2:36 pm | |
| WIth my violin I'm playing for you A sad little song Which is what I can do To accompany your plea When you ask me to stop And for a white flag You need to shop. PS....It's my legs that are weak...not my typing fingers... |
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oneagleswings ADMIN II
CCW GOLD MEMBER CCW SUPPORTER 2X POETRY CONTEST WINNER Posts : 4323 Age : 64 Join date : 2011-08-30 Location : south carolina
| Subject: Re: I Wish I Were Smart Tue Oct 02, 2012 2:39 pm | |
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Thena ADMIN II
CCW GOLD MEMBER CCW SUPPORTER POETRY & SHORT STORY CONTESTS WINNER Posts : 2875 Age : 79 Join date : 2011-09-11 Location : Sunny CA
| Subject: Re: I Wish I Were Smart Tue Oct 02, 2012 2:42 pm | |
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Thena ADMIN II
CCW GOLD MEMBER CCW SUPPORTER POETRY & SHORT STORY CONTESTS WINNER Posts : 2875 Age : 79 Join date : 2011-09-11 Location : Sunny CA
| Subject: Re: I Wish I Were Smart Tue Oct 02, 2012 2:49 pm | |
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A bit of fun We had today It's fun to work And fun to play
I think eaglewings Tried to go easy on me For a bit So I wouldn't get tired and quit.
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scottn SCRIBE (101-150posts)
Posts : 121 Join date : 2011-12-13
| Subject: Re: I Wish I Were Smart Sat Oct 06, 2012 4:16 am | |
| Hey Thena, like the first stanza and your use of visuals like the imagery of a bulb and the sun. |
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