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Thena
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PostSubject: Aging   Aging EmptyTue Sep 25, 2012 2:14 pm

Age

I told my once strong legs to walk swiftly
But they seemed to not want to walk at all
So I gave up going to shop at the mall.
I told my eyes to read the words in print
And although that was their intent
Far too much time was spent
squinting and struggling
So I gave up that fun night time
good book snuggling-
No more reading in my bed
until time to be a sleepyhead.
I told my hands to open jars
and turn knobs with no pain
And there my body failed again...
What is this thing that old age does,
this thing that creeps up on us
and turns us into old folks
before we know it?
And how come some age
so beautifully
and never show it?
I cannot stop all of the things
that age may do to me
But I pray
that it in spite of it all
My heart, soul, spirit,
the inner me
Will age beautifully.
Thena
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PostSubject: Re: Aging   Aging EmptyTue Sep 25, 2012 9:24 pm

Awwwh, very nice :)

My favorite part.....
Quote :
But I pray
that it in spite of it all
My heart, soul, spirit,
the inner me
Will age beautifully.



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PostSubject: Re: Aging   Aging EmptyWed Sep 26, 2012 6:56 am

Miss Thena, you're not getting older...you're getting bolder (boulder?).
You are beautiful to me, inside and out and you have the sweetest voice i wish everyone on this site could hear you read your poetry!
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PostSubject: Re: Aging   Aging EmptyWed Sep 26, 2012 5:06 pm

hmmmmm, jealous....can you post mp3's on here?
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PostSubject: Re: Aging   Aging EmptyFri Sep 28, 2012 2:02 pm

This is Just My Bodysuit

When God sent us to the earth
In the miracle we call birth
He housed our soul and spirit carefully
In a bodysuit that we could see.

It’s not that important to eternity
For we won’t have to wear it there
When we shed the earthly form
And meet Him in the air.

Some body suits are beautiful
While some others may consider plain
But it’s the spirit housed inside
That will God’s Heaven gain.

My bodysuit is wrinkled now
And my hair is turning gray
But it just reminds my spirit
That it’s closer to flying away!
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PostSubject: Re: Aging   Aging EmptyFri Sep 28, 2012 2:32 pm

i was referring to miss thena's speaking voice (sounds like a little girl...so cute).
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PostSubject: Re: Aging   Aging EmptyFri Sep 28, 2012 3:39 pm

I'll fly away on glory! I'll fly away.......One day very soooooooon Thena! heaven bound
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PostSubject: Re: Aging   Aging EmptyFri Sep 28, 2012 4:14 pm

LOL I guess people have an idea of how a little ole lady should sound and I don't seem to.

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PostSubject: Re: Aging   Aging EmptySat Oct 20, 2012 11:03 am

Awe, Miss Thena, you may not feel young, but you sure look like a young whooper snapper to me, and you're much wittier than most of us.


And, Miss Moni, Gold members are able to upload mp3's. Details are here: LINK
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PostSubject: Re: Aging   Aging EmptySat Oct 20, 2012 7:22 pm

Thanks Lora, I didn't make myself clear....I asked about mp3's to hear Thena's voice...but good info to know for myself too!
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PostSubject: Re: Aging   Aging EmptySat Oct 20, 2012 7:26 pm

Ok, I've done the deed dance whachadoo
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PostSubject: Re: Aging   Aging EmptySat Oct 20, 2012 8:59 pm

Got ya covered girlfriend. You're now a Gold Member. I sincerely appreciate your participation. Your work is beautiful and you're a delight to have as a member.
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PostSubject: Re: Aging   Aging EmptyMon Oct 22, 2012 9:53 am

blush Ahhh, Thank you!
And thank you Lora for the hard work of creating and administering a site where many can be blessed!
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