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cleo574 WRITERS’ MENTOR (500 + posts)
CCW GOLD MEMBER Posts : 542 Age : 77 Join date : 2011-08-18 Location : Oklahoma City, Oklahoma
| Subject: Darkness Sat Sep 29, 2012 11:12 pm | |
| The depths of darkness creep inside As the light grows dim by your side Its hard to know what to do When the darkness changes hue
It goes from light to very dark You can’t even see a little spark. The darkness makes you want to weep But even then, you still can’t sleep.
Now you can appreciate the light Even when it wasn’t bright. You wish now you had it back Now its really getting black.
You are really getting weary now Sitting and wondering how To get the light to come back. Maybe you have lost the knack.
Is it darkness in your soul Maybe something the devil stole? What do you do now that you know That you are reaping the seeds you sow?
Can you turn your life around? Or are you too far down? Finally blissful sleep so deep And still you find that you weep.
Ah, to wake and find it just a dream And you see the light really beam You know God is by your side And to think you could have died.
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worshipfreely WRITERS’ MENTOR (500 + posts)
CCW GOLD MEMBER POETRY CONTEST WINNER Posts : 832 Age : 51 Join date : 2011-08-29 Location : Hillsboro OR
| Subject: Re: Darkness Sat Sep 29, 2012 11:42 pm | |
| Wow, that was very powerful and poignant."When the darkness changes hue." Without HIM the darkness just keeps getting deeper well said. All glory to the Father! |
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Thena ADMIN II
CCW GOLD MEMBER CCW SUPPORTER POETRY & SHORT STORY CONTESTS WINNER Posts : 2875 Age : 79 Join date : 2011-09-11 Location : Sunny CA
| Subject: Re: Darkness Sun Sep 30, 2012 12:45 am | |
| I think it may be my new favorite of yours.
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oneagleswings ADMIN II
CCW GOLD MEMBER CCW SUPPORTER 2X POETRY CONTEST WINNER Posts : 4323 Age : 64 Join date : 2011-08-30 Location : south carolina
| Subject: Re: Darkness Sun Sep 30, 2012 6:42 am | |
| Very thought provoking piece read it several times and probably will again, one of your best! |
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cleo574 WRITERS’ MENTOR (500 + posts)
CCW GOLD MEMBER Posts : 542 Age : 77 Join date : 2011-08-18 Location : Oklahoma City, Oklahoma
| Subject: Re: Darkness Sun Sep 30, 2012 6:18 pm | |
| Thank you for all the good words everyone. Not exactly sure where this one came from in my mind, but it came out like it was supposed to I guess. Never wrote one quite like this before. Glad you all liked it. |
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Lora SITE ADMINISTRATOR
Posts : 5907 Age : 53 Join date : 2011-07-26 Location : Southern CA
| Subject: Re: Darkness Sat Oct 20, 2012 11:15 am | |
| I agree. I think this my new favorite too! Powerful piece, Miss Cleo. |
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cleo574 WRITERS’ MENTOR (500 + posts)
CCW GOLD MEMBER Posts : 542 Age : 77 Join date : 2011-08-18 Location : Oklahoma City, Oklahoma
| Subject: Re: Darkness Sat Oct 20, 2012 2:19 pm | |
| Thanks, I am glad you liked it. Sometimes I surprise myself.
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Lora SITE ADMINISTRATOR
Posts : 5907 Age : 53 Join date : 2011-07-26 Location : Southern CA
| Subject: Re: Darkness Sat Oct 20, 2012 2:25 pm | |
| Or, better yet, the Lord surprises us with new amazing stuff. He is the creator after all. Creativity is His thing. |
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