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PostSubject: Darkness   Darkness EmptySat Sep 29, 2012 11:12 pm

The depths of darkness creep inside
As the light grows dim by your side
Its hard to know what to do
When the darkness changes hue

It goes from light to very dark
You can’t even see a little spark.
The darkness makes you want to weep
But even then, you still can’t sleep.

Now you can appreciate the light
Even when it wasn’t bright.
You wish now you had it back
Now its really getting black.

You are really getting weary now
Sitting and wondering how
To get the light to come back.
Maybe you have lost the knack.

Is it darkness in your soul
Maybe something the devil stole?
What do you do now that you know
That you are reaping the seeds you sow?

Can you turn your life around?
Or are you too far down?
Finally blissful sleep so deep
And still you find that you weep.

Ah, to wake and find it just a dream
And you see the light really beam
You know God is by your side
And to think you could have died.

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PostSubject: Re: Darkness   Darkness EmptySat Sep 29, 2012 11:42 pm

Wow, that was very powerful and poignant."When the darkness changes hue." Without HIM the darkness just keeps getting deeper well said. All glory to the Father!
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PostSubject: Re: Darkness   Darkness EmptySun Sep 30, 2012 12:45 am

I think it may be my new favorite of yours.
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PostSubject: Re: Darkness   Darkness EmptySun Sep 30, 2012 6:42 am

Very thought provoking piece read it several times and probably will again, one of your best!
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PostSubject: Re: Darkness   Darkness EmptySun Sep 30, 2012 6:18 pm

Thank you for all the good words everyone. Not exactly sure where this one came from in my mind, but it came out like it was supposed to I guess. Never wrote one quite like this before. Glad you all liked it.
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PostSubject: Re: Darkness   Darkness EmptySat Oct 20, 2012 11:15 am

I agree. I think this my new favorite too! Powerful piece, Miss Cleo.
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PostSubject: Re: Darkness   Darkness EmptySat Oct 20, 2012 2:19 pm


Thanks, I am glad you liked it. Sometimes I surprise myself.
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PostSubject: Re: Darkness   Darkness EmptySat Oct 20, 2012 2:25 pm

Or, better yet, the Lord surprises us with new amazing stuff. He is the creator after all. Creativity is His thing.
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