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PostSubject: Counterpoint   Counterpoint EmptyMon Oct 15, 2012 3:57 pm
I went to a place with color, it is day.

I went to a place of noise, it is night.

I spoke with human intent, it was survival.

Patience in sacred, afraid and un-showing.

I tip-toed to the road, the rain and cold.

Washington street and Spanish Lane,

Accents were Dutch, Spanish or undetermined.

They spoke universal codes.

I understood well.

The eye is honesty in the darkest of capsules.
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PostSubject: Re: Counterpoint   Counterpoint EmptySat Oct 20, 2012 11:19 am
Wow, very deep. Read it several times. You are so very talented. Very, very nice work!
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PostSubject: Re: Counterpoint   Counterpoint EmptyTue Oct 23, 2012 9:02 am
Why thank you. It's all true. Peace and Blessings.
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PostSubject: Re: Counterpoint   Counterpoint EmptyFri Oct 26, 2012 9:20 am
Beautiful. No doubt.
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PostSubject: Re: Counterpoint   Counterpoint EmptyMon Nov 05, 2012 6:31 pm
It's a first draft. I have been so busy with school and such. But thank you
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