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PostSubject: A marriage   A marriage EmptyWed Oct 24, 2012 3:06 pm
With nails being driven into His opened hands
A crowd had gathered as the question stands
Do you take this whore to be your wife?
I do! He shouted as the breath left His life

On the altar with tears running down my face
In complete awe of the man who took my place
With but one life changing decision left to make
This man wants to be your husband will you partake?
I do! I do!
Jesus I want to be betrothed to you!
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PostSubject: Re: A marriage   A marriage EmptyFri Oct 26, 2012 9:33 am
Brilliant. Absolutely. Word.
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PostSubject: Re: A marriage   A marriage EmptyFri Oct 26, 2012 2:17 pm
Powerful, packs a punch with very few wasted words!
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PostSubject: Re: A marriage   A marriage EmptySat Oct 27, 2012 10:58 am
WOW!!! Awesome. That made me mist up. Powerful piece.
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PostSubject: Re: A marriage   A marriage EmptyTue Oct 30, 2012 6:25 am
A young man, blessed with a gift, I stand speechless at this one.
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