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PostSubject: Sailing   Sailing EmptyFri Oct 26, 2012 1:33 pm
Sailing


When the glimmer of day
Breaks in on my
Morning thoughts
I see the east

When his breath melts
Away the thought of
Death, my true north
Lights the way for
Today

The sunset will come
Soon enough
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PostSubject: Re: Sailing   Sailing EmptyFri Oct 26, 2012 1:53 pm
So true!
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PostSubject: Re: Sailing   Sailing EmptySat Oct 27, 2012 10:52 am
You know I'm one of your biggest fans. Love the way you can say so much with so few words.
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PostSubject: Re: Sailing   Sailing EmptySat Oct 27, 2012 12:28 pm
Thanks Lora, here is one I just wrote for friends I have never met like you
Faraway Friends
By Scott Newport

Her hands are like
The palms of a blossom
Ready to yield her fruit

Her kind words
Like an overabundant
Plate of apples and pears

When she reaches out
Her eyes resemble
Sweet delicacies

Someday I’ll meet
Her, face to face
But for now
I’ll just listen
From the other
End of the phone


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PostSubject: Re: Sailing   Sailing EmptySat Oct 27, 2012 12:46 pm
Awe, that is so beautiful. It is very like our beloved "Song of Solomon." I look forward to the day when I will be united with all of my beloved Christian friends online. What a day that will be! I imagine, even though I've never seen a picture of many of them, I will still know who they are right away.
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PostSubject: Re: Sailing   Sailing EmptySat Oct 27, 2012 3:25 pm
So, so calm and smooth. Beautiful. Word.
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