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PostSubject: 7x10 words=a picture (w/audio)   7x10 words=a picture (w/audio) EmptyTue Oct 30, 2012 2:52 pm

Abandoned in dark rooms
snapshots develop
negatives envelop
over exposures
sun blistered disclosures

Beneath a safelight's glow
Baptized in caustic solutions
hung to dry
clouded lenses
revealing tainted contrasts

Poor focus
frames off center
true forms silhouetted

Locusts in background
devouring fields of vision
cropped in closely
only main subjects are of concern

Developing from out of negatives
processing into a new perspective
centering on...
what may yet be salvaged
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PostSubject: Re: 7x10 words=a picture (w/audio)   7x10 words=a picture (w/audio) EmptyTue Oct 30, 2012 3:37 pm

I like it, makes one look at two sides at the same time
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PostSubject: Re: 7x10 words=a picture (w/audio)   7x10 words=a picture (w/audio) EmptyFri Nov 02, 2012 12:19 pm

Kinda' like bi-polarism or schizophrenia or any of a host of mental illnesses exhibiting such symptoms/qualities. Look through a reflection/transparency of one's self in a window sometime and realize how you can see outside clearly yet be aware of your own reflection looking back at you simultaneously it's pretty amazing really. Looking out and in at once, but requires a step back to take it all in! It's a lot more difficult to see what's looming/impending right before our eyes or "hiding in plain sight".
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PostSubject: Re: 7x10 words=a picture (w/audio)   7x10 words=a picture (w/audio) EmptySat Nov 03, 2012 1:50 pm

Another powerful one. We used to develop film in our bathroom back when we were young. There was such a thrill doing the prints and watching the picture appear...now I do that with the computer. This one really was special to me.
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PostSubject: Re: 7x10 words=a picture (w/audio)   7x10 words=a picture (w/audio) EmptyMon Nov 05, 2012 8:16 pm

It folds within itself. Very clever and intrigueing. I love every word from top to bottom. Nothing undeveloped about this one!
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w/audio.
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PostSubject: Re: 7x10 words=a picture (w/audio)   7x10 words=a picture (w/audio) EmptySun Nov 11, 2012 12:28 pm

Okay, where'd it go?
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oops...it's there now, i messed up though:(
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