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PostSubject: Marching orders   Marching orders EmptySun Dec 09, 2012 7:52 pm




Don't let me hold myself back
Don't let my own doubts dissuade me
Don't let the enemies dark clouds of insecurity pervade me
Crack open the blinds
Let your Son light stream in
Light it up Lord
Light it up
Don't let that circuit breaker trip again, please
i'm asking in prayer on my knees

Breaking curses
Severing bail-bonds
trading stocks in hearses
For Investments in Saviour's bonds
Your redemption center open 24/7
bring recyclables in
leave with a significant amount of change
Nothing surmounts Thy Holy Name
not seeking fame
this is no game
can't operate in shame
tempered in flame
your name i proclaim
YESHUA!

Hugging all the wrong trees
While barking at bees
Novelty stores' wind-up chattering teeth
like bear traps hidden in piles of leaves

Carve your initials in me J. C.
set me loose to roll up my sleeves
from a gurney flat-lined
to goosebumps overwhelming
healed a broken mind
fulfilling a destiny
set a course for a brand new journey
deployed and re-assigned
enemys crosshair's on me
once upon a time
not so long ago
that used to alarm me
so obsessed with one man
you overlooked a surrounding army






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PostSubject: Re: Marching orders   Marching orders EmptySat Dec 29, 2012 10:56 pm

I feel ya brother! I love the way you put your heart into this one. I love the use of the tree metaphor. Awesome!
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