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Jak Hardy
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PostSubject: Raindrops with Faces   Raindrops with Faces EmptyMon Jan 21, 2013 7:10 pm

Let go; liberated by the Cloud’s will,
Now I’m rolling, falling: so constant; chilled,
Determined, ready, the wind roaring loud,
Proclaiming, “I Love you and in you I am proud!”

Smiling, I look, my eyes growing misty…
Dammed by only a righteous anger.
The raindrops moulded clearly have somehow become murky,
They’re putting themselves in horrible danger.

My anger subsides and turns into pity,
As in the distance, shines the city.
These raindrops, like teardrops, have purpose in form.
Crafted by the cloud, in whom there’s no flaw.

Yet they cover themselves- raindrops hide behind masks,
Their smiles sewn by an expression so dark-
Of insecurity, fear, confusion and doubt,
Their hearts yearning for a way to get out.

I look below- there’s a thirsty pasture.
I know I’m needed forever after.
But these others, alone, so cold and self-neglected,
Don’t understand that their hope was resurrected
When the water of life, quenching judgment on their fault
Was evaporated to the throne where there can be no assault.
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PostSubject: Re: Raindrops with Faces   Raindrops with Faces EmptyThu Jan 31, 2013 12:11 am

Love this one. You've got quite a lot of talent there. Very nice work!
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PostSubject: Re: Raindrops with Faces   Raindrops with Faces EmptyThu Jan 31, 2013 11:03 am

Holy cannoli! Well done, little one. Absolutely.
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PostSubject: Re: Raindrops with Faces   Raindrops with Faces EmptyFri Feb 01, 2013 2:05 pm

Love seeing your talents on display again, missed you kiddo God Bless!
Cascading down, pristine sparkling flows of eloquence !
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