Jak Hardy WRITER (51-100 posts)
POETRY CONTEST WINNER Posts : 82 Age : 27 Join date : 2011-11-07 Location : Sunshine Coast, Australia
| Subject: Raindrops with Faces Mon Jan 21, 2013 7:10 pm | |
| Let go; liberated by the Cloud’s will, Now I’m rolling, falling: so constant; chilled, Determined, ready, the wind roaring loud, Proclaiming, “I Love you and in you I am proud!”
Smiling, I look, my eyes growing misty… Dammed by only a righteous anger. The raindrops moulded clearly have somehow become murky, They’re putting themselves in horrible danger.
My anger subsides and turns into pity, As in the distance, shines the city. These raindrops, like teardrops, have purpose in form. Crafted by the cloud, in whom there’s no flaw.
Yet they cover themselves- raindrops hide behind masks, Their smiles sewn by an expression so dark- Of insecurity, fear, confusion and doubt, Their hearts yearning for a way to get out.
I look below- there’s a thirsty pasture. I know I’m needed forever after. But these others, alone, so cold and self-neglected, Don’t understand that their hope was resurrected When the water of life, quenching judgment on their fault Was evaporated to the throne where there can be no assault. |
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Lora SITE ADMINISTRATOR
Posts : 5907 Age : 53 Join date : 2011-07-26 Location : Southern CA
| Subject: Re: Raindrops with Faces Thu Jan 31, 2013 12:11 am | |
| Love this one. You've got quite a lot of talent there. Very nice work! |
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rhymarhyma WRITERS’ MENTOR (500 + posts)
Posts : 549 Join date : 2011-08-11 Location : Denver, CO
| Subject: Re: Raindrops with Faces Thu Jan 31, 2013 11:03 am | |
| Holy cannoli! Well done, little one. Absolutely. |
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oneagleswings ADMIN II
CCW GOLD MEMBER CCW SUPPORTER 2X POETRY CONTEST WINNER Posts : 4323 Age : 64 Join date : 2011-08-30 Location : south carolina
| Subject: Re: Raindrops with Faces Fri Feb 01, 2013 2:05 pm | |
| Love seeing your talents on display again, missed you kiddo God Bless! Cascading down, pristine sparkling flows of eloquence ! |
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