Jak Hardy WRITER (51-100 posts)
POETRY CONTEST WINNER Posts : 82 Age : 27 Join date : 2011-11-07 Location : Sunshine Coast, Australia
| Subject: Divine Authority Mon Jan 21, 2013 7:04 pm | |
| You wear light like a crown, Oh the glorious splendour Of your majesty and ageless reign.
You wear light like a robe, Oh the wondrous power of your mercy and gracious name.
And you sit on a throne of flames, dancing fiercely in the wind of your Spirit, wind unfading, Carrying whispers of your love.
You wear light like a crown, light like a robe, And you sit on a throne of flames. In royalty divine; in authoritative mind. Dominion is in your name. |
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Lora SITE ADMINISTRATOR
Posts : 5907 Age : 53 Join date : 2011-07-26 Location : Southern CA
| Subject: Re: Divine Authority Sat Jan 26, 2013 1:36 pm | |
| You've got some awesome skills as a poet. Love the structure, rhyme scheme, your use of alliteration ad consonance, and your moving message. Very nice work! |
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