Jak Hardy
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 |  Subject: Eternal Ring Mon Jan 21, 2013 7:09 pm | |
| Gold, so rich, shining in deity
Royal to be moulded and carved;
Forming a diadem, eternally placed,
Golden gift from the Ancient of Days.
Silver, sparkling, to be made a price,
In coins to ring and echo afar,
A sacrifice immortal with eternal cost,
Silvery wake trailing in time.
Brass, glowing not, lest it be made,
Weapons to fight, the sword to be drawn,
Made a judgment raised, brazen, atop
Bronzed history to be wiped away.
Precious and vibrant, stones of variance,
Some rare, some not yet all unique.
Crystals of diverse, divine of splendour,
Polarised, parallel and perfect. Millennial.
Royal blood superseding judgment: a setting for God’s chosen. |
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Lora
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Location : Southern CA
| | Subject: Re: Eternal Ring Wed Jan 30, 2013 10:47 pm | |
| Had to read that one several times. I know this may sound weird, but this reminds me of The Lord of the Rings. Perhaps it's because I just got finished reading it. LOL. Otherwise, love the flow and strong tone you put into this one. |
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oneagleswings
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| | Subject: Re: Eternal Ring Sun Feb 03, 2013 6:32 am | |
| There is an undeniable "ring of truth" to this fine work...Amen?
Layers of rings
ages of trees
overheard in odeons
back-staged rehearsals of soliloquies
come as you are
drop what you're doing
Angel of the hour's time has lapsed
from out of caverns
boldly confessing on bent knees
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