Doug Blair ADMIN II
CCW GOLD MEMBER POETRY CONTEST WINNER Posts : 644 Age : 73 Join date : 2013-02-03 Location : Waterloo, Ontario, Canada
| Subject: So Visual...Easpling! Fri Feb 22, 2013 2:34 am | |
| Easpling is a new participant in this forum. She has entered a short story in a contest. That forum does not allow comments by others. But I MUST comment. The story wrapped around a sorry man with a snapshot is masterful. So visual. I am right there in a moment. My heartstrings are pulled BIG TIME. The redeeming quality of this piece is unmistakable, and it starts with child-like honesty and compassion in the little, observant girl.
The Mother catches on. She has a record of some suffering. Therein lies the seed of her compassion. And compassion brings on the power of Christ. I share a link entitled "Compassion".
I have been drinking here from a "pool of light". Truly the purpose of Christian writing. Thank you, Easpling.
http://momentsmidstream.blogspot.ca/2009/05/compassion.html |
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oneagleswings ADMIN II
CCW GOLD MEMBER CCW SUPPORTER 2X POETRY CONTEST WINNER Posts : 4323 Age : 64 Join date : 2011-08-30 Location : south carolina
| Subject: Re: So Visual...Easpling! Sun Mar 31, 2013 7:51 pm | |
| Had my vote hands down immediately, lovely piece. |
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