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Doug Blair
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PostSubject: So Visual...Easpling!   So Visual...Easpling! EmptyFri Feb 22, 2013 2:34 am

Easpling is a new participant in this forum. She has entered a short story in a contest. That forum does not allow comments by others. But I MUST comment. The story wrapped around a sorry man with a snapshot is masterful. So visual. I am right there in a moment. My heartstrings are pulled BIG TIME. The redeeming quality of this piece is unmistakable, and it starts with child-like honesty and compassion in the little, observant girl.

The Mother catches on. She has a record of some suffering. Therein lies the seed of her compassion. And compassion brings on the power of Christ. I share a link entitled "Compassion".

I have been drinking here from a "pool of light". Truly the purpose of Christian writing. Thank you, Easpling.

http://momentsmidstream.blogspot.ca/2009/05/compassion.html
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PostSubject: Re: So Visual...Easpling!   So Visual...Easpling! EmptySun Mar 31, 2013 7:51 pm

Had my vote hands down immediately, lovely piece.

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