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PostSubject: Preposterous   Preposterous EmptyWed Feb 20, 2013 6:55 pm


Arms akimbo,
Stately stance carefully orchestrated
Calculated glare, chin thrusted forward
Is this me, or am I over rated?
My thoughts, my ways
Do I not have the right of self indulgence?
Who have I hurt, what do I care?
It's my life and I don't want to share.
I did this on my own and I will
chew
destroy
annihilate
whatever it takes
to come out on top.
Lord, I want to sit by your side.
See how hard I worked
To get to where I am?
Was this not a noble effort
herculean
gargantuan
I am everything I expected
Me to be
Can't you see
That it's me
Did I really change?
Somewhere?
Somehow?
Oh, wretch that I am!




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PostSubject: Re: Preposterous   Preposterous EmptySun Feb 24, 2013 1:17 am

Awesome topic, well written, and very moving. My new favorite of yours.
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PostSubject: Re: Preposterous   Preposterous EmptySun Feb 24, 2013 2:08 am

Two sets of books. One for business; one for God and fellow man.

Nope.

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PostSubject: Re: Preposterous   Preposterous EmptySun Feb 24, 2013 12:13 pm

I'm back to read it again.
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PostSubject: Re: Preposterous   Preposterous EmptySun Feb 24, 2013 1:00 pm

"Preposterous"...well now that you mention it, hadn't really thought of it that way...hmmm?
i like to think everyone deserves the benefit of the doubt...but then again, no one deserves to be subjected to obvious doubt which benefits no one.
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