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rhymarhyma
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PostSubject: The tears of my future   The tears of my future EmptyWed Apr 03, 2013 10:02 pm

In the middle of the night my son screamed to me
and recounted a dream that he dreamed to me
The light of truth in his eyes brightly beamed to me
as he described the way he'd been redeemed to me

He had a trail of tears that led to me
as he pulled out a Bible and he read to me
"Dad, the devil's not dead, but he's dead to me
for I heard God's Word and what he said to me..."

"I live, I'll kill, I died for you...I live, I'll kill, I died for you..."
"I live, I'll kill, I died for you...and now I have my kingdom set aside for you"


As Christ holds me, I held my child
A vision in the night had spelled my child
and I wondered what it was that compelled my child
to be leery of the world before it felled my child

A premonition sent to warn my child
that we all must die to be reborn, my child
To chase away every day that we mourn, my child
Know to you Christ's love is sworn, my child...

"I live, I'll kill, I died for you...I live, I'll kill, I died for you..."
"I live, I'll kill, I died for you...hear the four horsemen as they ride for you"


God killed the demons that were haunting me
parading me around and flaunting me
and as God lifted me up, others were taunting me
but the Lord never gave up on wanting me

He wants you, my child, he wants to know you're near
to keep you close, to catch your tear
To ease your trouble, to calm your fear
and to remember the reason that you're here

"I live, I'll kill, I died for you...I live, I'll kill, I died for you..."
"I live, I'll kill, I died for you...I opened up my arms this wide for you"


God sometimes calls us at our darkest times
when the demons ring their bells and their darkest chimes
and we're well in the midst of our darkest crimes
and it's from these nights I write my darkest rhymes

Since then God's broken the ties that bind me
and gave me sight when the devil tried to blind me
I warn you now, Satan, you can try and come and find me
but I've got an army of angels standing right behind me

"I live, I'll kill, I died for you...I live, I'll kill, I died for you..."
"I live, I'll kill, I died for you...your future lies in the tears that I cried for you"
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PostSubject: Re: The tears of my future   The tears of my future EmptyThu Apr 04, 2013 11:22 pm

God killed the demons that were haunting me
parading me around and flaunting me
and as God lifted me up, others were taunting me
but the Lord never gave up on wanting me



These words speak for me very well. And when I think these thoughts I weep and leap for joy.
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PostSubject: Re: The tears of my future   The tears of my future EmptyThu May 02, 2013 12:11 am

I am one of your biggest fans. You have a very special gift that I know blesses all who read your work.
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Wow! Just WoW!
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PostSubject: Re: The tears of my future   The tears of my future EmptyFri May 03, 2013 10:01 pm

Hey, I am a HUGE fan of everyone here. I was supposed to know you guys, even if only through computer-world, yo. Out of the seven-billion+ people on this earth, the odds of you three commenting on my rhyme are impossible. Impossible by man's odds. God does his own thing, yo. No doubt. No accidents. Much love to you all. Word.
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PostSubject: Re: The tears of my future   The tears of my future EmptyFri May 03, 2013 11:18 pm

Getting that kind of response from Miss Thena must mean you created something quite extraordinary. She usually doesn't move that fast.
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