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2X POETRY CONTEST WINNER Posts : 75 Age : 30 Join date : 2012-08-25 Location : Texas
Subject: Diamonds Wed Jun 19, 2013 8:47 pm
She's as beautiful as a diamond And she's got the cuts like one too But sometimes she feels like she's in a glass case waiting to be used Her life at home isn't much better than the life that's showing And there's a guy she knows she'd like to call her own she sees him as love He just sees her as a fling and he's got her wrapped around his finger like a ring after years and years of pressure her heart's been hardened to pain and losing will to get loose but shes caught up in love and she wont be moved! Shes pawned herself out! selling herself short! and every time her happiness grows shes forced to abort it her hearts a house but it needs home! she needs peace she needs some hope!
When I met her I saw a diamond that's been in the rough I touched her scars and said "what an exquisite cut" And I told her that she's beautiful! That she's worth way more than she thinks! That she's not defined by the choices she's made! I told her if he's a man he would see you're a diamond And if he doesn't like your cut he doesn't deserve anything i told her that i know that it hurts! that ive been there too That sometimes in life it feels like you're living to lose
But baby girl if you could see the luster on your face If you could see through the same clarity you portray! You're worth more than you think....
Now I know I know I know You think if there was a God He would save you And if there was a God He'd look at your cuts and hate you Because I know that feeling I know how it feels to feel like you're praying but it's all hitting the ceiling "WHERE ARE YOU GOD WHY WON'T YOU HELP ME?! If you were real why won't you help me!" And I spent years and years and years Laying in a bathtub drowning in my tears asking for a God who didn't exist to help me I kept screaming and never got any answers If God wanted to help me He ran out of chances! Oh I was so done So I know how you feel.... I know how you feel Then one day I finally gave up trying and praying and started just praying And I got an answer..... He was there the whole time just waiting Waiting for me to stop trying And give it to him
but i have hope and know someone who can help you His name is Jesus He healed my heart and He's standing there waiting to kiss your scars He made you a diamond and brags about your beauty So if you would stop trying And ask Him truly...
Jesus take my life and give me a new one
oneagleswings ADMIN II
CCW GOLD MEMBER CCW SUPPORTER 2X POETRY CONTEST WINNER Posts : 4323 Age : 64 Join date : 2011-08-30 Location : south carolina
Subject: Re: Diamonds Thu Jun 20, 2013 2:58 am
These...the kind of diamonds which cannot be measured by karats. "diamonds in the ruff"
Last edited by oneagleswings on Thu Jun 20, 2013 6:55 am; edited 2 times in total
oneagleswings ADMIN II
CCW GOLD MEMBER CCW SUPPORTER 2X POETRY CONTEST WINNER Posts : 4323 Age : 64 Join date : 2011-08-30 Location : south carolina
Subject: Re: Diamonds Thu Jun 20, 2013 5:48 am
Can one see the unconscious "non-secular", struggling within the "secular?"...it's a gem of a song either way. It's how we listen that matters (Romans 8:28). Close one's eyes and devote this song to The Lord...and tell me if you agree or not. Lot's of plaguarizers...but only one true Author! Let me know if you think I am mistaken in this...please.
rhymarhyma WRITERS’ MENTOR (500 + posts)
Posts : 549 Join date : 2011-08-11 Location : Denver, CO
Subject: Re: Diamonds Thu Jun 20, 2013 10:31 am
Brilliant! No word-play intended. I know a lot of "diamonds", yo. So I pray. Word.