Christian Creative Writers

A FREE CHRISTIAN WRITERS' FORUM
 
HomeHome  PortalPortal  PublicationsPublications  SearchSearch  Latest imagesLatest images  RegisterRegister  Log in  SpotlightSpotlight  JesusJesus  
NO REGISTRATION**FEEL FREE TO COMMENT AS A GUEST**NO REGISTRATION**POST YOUR POETRY OR STORIES AS A GUEST**NO REGISTRATION**WRITERS RESOURCES**NO REGISTRATION**CHRISTIAN DISCUSSION**NO REGISTRATION**GREAT WRITING TIPS**

Share
 

 The Last Dance (for my friend's father)

View previous topic View next topic Go down 
AuthorMessage
Thena
ADMIN II
ADMIN II
Thena

CCW GOLD MEMBER CCW GOLD MEMBER
CCW SUPPORTER CCW SUPPORTER
POETRY & SHORT STORY CONTESTS WINNER POETRY & SHORT STORY CONTESTS WINNER
Posts : 2875
Age : 79
Join date : 2011-09-11
Location : Sunny CA

The Last Dance (for my friend's father) Empty
PostSubject: The Last Dance (for my friend's father)   The Last Dance (for my friend's father) EmptyThu Sep 22, 2011 1:59 am

The Last Dance

All night he had stood by her bedside;
Now one more kiss and he walked away.
He was tall and slender
With hair that had turned gray.
He looked at us and said
“It’s over.
Our last dance together is done:
I will treasure the memory,
Of every single one.”
“For our love was a dance, he said,
Started when we were young and strong
But continued through these many years
When sometimes it was hard to move along.
We danced to celebrate our wedding
And the addition of tiny feet to our score,
We dance to celebrate being together
And never wanted anything more.
We carried one another when needed
And our steps slowed down a bit
But never did we consider
That our dance we ought to quit.
We danced right through hardship
And times when things were tough
We danced through illness together
When the going was really rough.
We danced up the hills and down the valleys
We danced on the sandy seashore
But now my sweet partner is going home
And shall dance there for evermore.
I wish I could see onto Heaven’s balcony
And send a kiss to her from me
Just to say that I will join her someday
And we shall dance through eternity.
Thena
Back to top Go down
http://thena.typepad.com
Lora
SITE ADMINISTRATOR
SITE ADMINISTRATOR
Lora

Posts : 5907
Age : 53
Join date : 2011-07-26
Location : Southern CA

The Last Dance (for my friend's father) Empty
PostSubject: Re: The Last Dance (for my friend's father)   The Last Dance (for my friend's father) EmptyThu Sep 22, 2011 12:28 pm

That is a beautiful example of how the Lord meant marriage to be. He gave us such a special gift of marriage knowing that "it is not good that man should be alone." Thank you Thena. I just love your work.
Back to top Go down
http://loraconnor.com
Thena
ADMIN II
ADMIN II
Thena

CCW GOLD MEMBER CCW GOLD MEMBER
CCW SUPPORTER CCW SUPPORTER
POETRY & SHORT STORY CONTESTS WINNER POETRY & SHORT STORY CONTESTS WINNER
Posts : 2875
Age : 79
Join date : 2011-09-11
Location : Sunny CA

The Last Dance (for my friend's father) Empty
PostSubject: Re: The Last Dance (for my friend's father)   The Last Dance (for my friend's father) EmptyThu Sep 22, 2011 12:50 pm

Thank you Lora, for your kindness and encouragement.
Back to top Go down
http://thena.typepad.com
scoobywriter
NEW KID ON THE BLOCK (0-5 Posts)
NEW KID ON THE BLOCK (0-5 Posts)
scoobywriter

Posts : 1
Join date : 2011-09-22
Location : Oklahoma

The Last Dance (for my friend's father) Empty
PostSubject: Re: The Last Dance (for my friend's father)   The Last Dance (for my friend's father) EmptyThu Sep 22, 2011 5:41 pm

Good poem. Love the dog over the bathtub as well.
Back to top Go down
http://www.youravon.com/pinero
Ant
APPRENTICE (6-25 posts)
APPRENTICE (6-25 posts)
Ant

Posts : 10
Join date : 2011-09-22

The Last Dance (for my friend's father) Empty
PostSubject: Re: The Last Dance (for my friend's father)   The Last Dance (for my friend's father) EmptyFri Sep 23, 2011 2:12 pm

Beautiful... It makes my heart ache, and I can only hope to have a marriage like that... Good job...
Back to top Go down
Sponsored content




The Last Dance (for my friend's father) Empty
PostSubject: Re: The Last Dance (for my friend's father)   The Last Dance (for my friend's father) Empty

Back to top Go down
 
The Last Dance (for my friend's father)
View previous topic View next topic Back to top 
Share this topic...
Link this topic
URL:
BBCode:
HTML:
Page 1 of 1

Permissions in this forum:You cannot reply to topics in this forum
Christian Creative Writers :: CHRISTIAN WRITERS' FORUM :: Poetry-