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rhymarhyma
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PostSubject: Could I save the world?   Could I save the world? EmptySat Aug 13, 2011 12:04 pm


When I look at my son, when I look deep in his eyes
and I see the true child, the love, the surprise
could I sacrifice him, knowing if I don't the world dies
Knowing, even knowing, that again he would rise

Even if I knew I'd see him come day three
If it were certain, for sure, a true guarantee
and on the day he returned, mankind would be free
could I watch him get humiliated, for all to see

Could I watch him carry his cross, and not offer a hand
Watch him drag it, weak and bloody, across the land
without screaming "That's enough!" and drawing a line in the sand
Could I watch him fall down, and not make a stand

Could I watch him get whipped, and thorns pressed to his head
Could I look him in his eyes as he cried, as he bled
Could I allow this, even though I knew he'd rise from the dead
No, man I couldn't, I'd ask that I die instead

But if it didn't work because I wasn't the one
and if I wasn't good enough to save everyone
If no matter how I tried, I couldn't save anyone
Then the world would have to die, because I could not give up my son

I could not let him go, I could not say good-bye
I could not bear to see a painful look in his eye
Without my son, every day, I would only lay and cry
My son is my life, so I guess the world would die
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PostSubject: Re: Could I save the world?   Could I save the world? EmptySat Aug 13, 2011 12:31 pm

Thankfully, we have a God who loved us enough to do that for us.
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PostSubject: Re: Could I save the world?   Could I save the world? EmptySat Aug 13, 2011 12:32 pm

I keep trying to stay away from your work, because I end up sitting here in a puddle, but it keeps drawing me back.
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PostSubject: Re: Could I save the world?   Could I save the world? EmptySat Aug 13, 2011 12:48 pm

Nobody loves everybody like God does. Word. I'm glad you like it, and I appreciate your advice. I even put a couple in quatrain form today.
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