Bizgainey APPRENTICE (6-25 posts)
CCW GOLD MEMBER Posts : 18 Join date : 2014-07-19 Location : Vero Beach, Florida Charity : IJM Charity : Harvest House International
| Subject: Eden's Strangled Hold Fri Aug 22, 2014 7:29 am | |
| Eden’s Strangled Hold ©Biz Gainey, 2013 Peace we must wrest from the blood soaked hand, Eden’s Strangled hold. She does dance we all to the rim of our self; Do we see? Hope flees our dance, strung aloft in winged flight. Lunge toward her with loss deep; we plunge, exhale To know rest peace affords. The stench of this stain must affront, embody sensual hope. We invoke Beyond self he who fires heart’s soft ache, aflame for more. We invoke! Beleaguered years worn red aggression’s pose, awe struck. Saddened heart’s eye fails to spy skylight, dim is justhope. One must disrupt Blood soaked fear Grip-clinched One must aright Half sighted sight one must release, Control. Opened heart one must hold tight, Surrender. Spring washes death’s decay; womb-aroused Life, yields! We invoke Beyond self he who fires heart’s soft ache, aflame for more. We invoke! Loose! the stoned, wall-chained chest Life aloft in winged flight breathes relief, saved is the soul starved. Peace we must wrest from the blood soaked hand, Eden’s strangled hold. She does dance we all to the rim of our self.
Do we see? Hope. |
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rhymarhyma WRITERS’ MENTOR (500 + posts)
Posts : 549 Join date : 2011-08-11 Location : Denver, CO
| Subject: Re: Eden's Strangled Hold Sat Aug 30, 2014 5:11 pm | |
| Fantastico! If that's even a word. No doubt. Peace |
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Bizgainey APPRENTICE (6-25 posts)
CCW GOLD MEMBER Posts : 18 Join date : 2014-07-19 Location : Vero Beach, Florida Charity : IJM Charity : Harvest House International
| Subject: Re: Eden's Strangled Hold Tue Sep 02, 2014 7:09 am | |
| Thanks!! If it's not a word, it should be!! |
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Jak Hardy WRITER (51-100 posts)
POETRY CONTEST WINNER Posts : 82 Age : 27 Join date : 2011-11-07 Location : Sunshine Coast, Australia
| Subject: Re: Eden's Strangled Hold Mon Jan 19, 2015 4:50 am | |
| That's an incredible piece. I especially like the vision that the central line evokes --> - Bizgainey wrote:
- Peace we must wrest from the blood soaked hand, Eden’s strangled hold
God Bless ya! |
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Bizgainey APPRENTICE (6-25 posts)
CCW GOLD MEMBER Posts : 18 Join date : 2014-07-19 Location : Vero Beach, Florida Charity : IJM Charity : Harvest House International
| Subject: Re: Eden's Strangled Hold Tue Jan 20, 2015 1:21 pm | |
| Thanks for taking the time to read it and to comment! Grace and Peace! |
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