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chele
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PostSubject: Tell Me   Tell Me EmptySat Oct 01, 2011 12:09 am

Tell Me

Tell me, why is it
For I cannot see
Why You loved
Me enough
To die for me

What did I do
To deserve
So much love
From You
My Savior
And the Father above

For I am unworthy
And in shame
Hide my face
To be the
Recipient of
Your mercy and grace

So with a humble heart
Lord, it’s You I will serve
For You have loved me much
More than I ever deserved


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PostSubject: Re: Tell Me   Tell Me EmptySat Oct 01, 2011 1:26 am

I love the prayerful tone in this poem. It is so humble. My favorite stanza is the last one:

So with a humble heart
Lord, it’s You I will serve
For You have loved me much
More than I ever deserved

One small question. Is this a typo in the first line?
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chele
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PostSubject: Re: Tell Me   Tell Me EmptySat Oct 01, 2011 8:02 am

Thanks Lora. Yes that was a typo lol.
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PostSubject: Re: Tell Me   Tell Me EmptySat Oct 01, 2011 5:52 pm

I know that feeling so well. You could sing this...
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PostSubject: Re: Tell Me   Tell Me EmptySun Oct 02, 2011 2:35 am

I keep asking myself the same things everyday, all I can say to Him is thank you for loving me when I was unlovable and unloving...I love you Lord and thank you for Loving me...AAAmen !
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