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 Harsh Words (A Limerick)

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Bizgainey
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PostSubject: Harsh Words (A Limerick)   Harsh Words (A Limerick) EmptySun Oct 19, 2014 5:02 am

Harsh Words (A Limerick)
©Biz Gainey, 2014

Harsh words slip their slide from the north to the south;
You know!  The distance between one’s mind and one’s mouth.
Erode hope as they tumble,
Cripple life as they stumble,
Maim one’s heart ‘Neath the weight of their own frail glass house!
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Brilliant! Word.
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PostSubject: Re: Harsh Words (A Limerick)   Harsh Words (A Limerick) EmptyTue Jan 20, 2015 1:21 pm

Thank you!
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PostSubject: Re: Harsh Words (A Limerick)   Harsh Words (A Limerick) EmptyThu Jan 22, 2015 7:53 am

I an not interested in correcting some else . . . nor do I believe I will ever 'master' the poetic art.  Thank you, though.
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