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Last edited by crystalleek on Fri Aug 12, 2011 7:04 pm; edited 2 times in total
Lora SITE ADMINISTRATOR
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Subject: Re: sorry deleting Fri Aug 12, 2011 5:21 pm
I love the use of an apostrophe, or the paper, in this poem. This poem reminds me of the many times I've stared down at a blank page and wondering what to write and wanting to glorify God, whatever I wrote. It's really very good.
crystalleek WRITER (51-100 posts)
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Subject: Re: sorry deleting Fri Aug 12, 2011 5:22 pm
I would really appreciate comments...
rhymarhyma WRITERS’ MENTOR (500 + posts)
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Subject: Re: sorry deleting Fri Aug 12, 2011 5:28 pm
Brilliant! I am blessed to be amongst the first to read your writings. Word.
crystalleek WRITER (51-100 posts)
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Subject: Re: sorry deleting Fri Aug 12, 2011 5:29 pm
I can`t really explain how ecstatic I am to hear somebody else`s opinion on my work.
rhymarhyma WRITERS’ MENTOR (500 + posts)
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Subject: Re: sorry deleting Sat Aug 13, 2011 9:09 pm
Well, since you took this one down, it would be a blessing to my eyes to read another one you wrote.