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christianonfire7
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PostSubject: Light and Darkness    Light and Darkness  EmptySat Aug 13, 2011 10:21 pm

| Written by me, Jamie Gandy |


Silence surrounds us,
Brick walls to keep us imprisoned,
Blocked out from any source of light,
Demons attacking from the utter darkness,
Tearing at us, trying to kill our spirits,
Continually they come, with claw against flesh...

God I pray to You,
Begging for forgiveness,
In our dying hour we cry for You,
As we hit the ground, bodies bleeding,
The ugly creatures upon us, wanting our souls,
We cry, we cry, we cry for You.

In a flash like Lightning You came,
With a wave of Your hand the creatures tremble,
They beg You not to harm them,
But Your Light, Your Holiness burns them,
They flee into the darkness they came from,
As You come to us and lift us up,
You mend the wounds and heal the scars,
" You are Forgiven.'
With that Saving Grace we are made new,
In the Glorious Splendor of Your Light.
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PostSubject: Re: Light and Darkness    Light and Darkness  EmptySat Aug 13, 2011 10:34 pm

I love the juxtaposition of darkness and light. Great poem christianonfire7!
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PostSubject: Re: Light and Darkness    Light and Darkness  EmptySun Aug 14, 2011 5:57 am

Fantastic! It's so descriptive, it's like I can almost see it happening, or see you writing it, or something. I see something. Anyway, I really, really like it. Thank you for posting.
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PostSubject: Re: Light and Darkness    Light and Darkness  EmptySun Sep 11, 2011 1:51 pm

Vivid imagery, loved it !
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PostSubject: Re: Light and Darkness    Light and Darkness  EmptySun Sep 11, 2011 2:05 pm

What an unnerving picture you paint! Awesome work!
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PostSubject: Re: Light and Darkness    Light and Darkness  EmptySun Sep 11, 2011 2:14 pm

It is a whole novel in itself.
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PostSubject: Re: Light and Darkness    Light and Darkness  EmptySun Dec 25, 2011 11:48 pm

:)
beautiful.
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