rhymarhyma WRITERS’ MENTOR (500 + posts)
Posts : 549 Join date : 2011-08-11 Location : Denver, CO
| Subject: Screams of silence Sat Nov 05, 2011 11:46 pm | |
| Lost in time, lost in rhyme
has tomorrow come and gone
A weeping mime commits a crime
and his sorrow marches on
Left behind, color blind
orange sunsets make him blue
He tries to find his missing mind
in a box he can't break through
Every side, trapped inside
viewed by everyone around
Can't run and hide, although he tried
can't scream...he makes no sound
Painted joy, fake decoy
lonely tears roll down his cheeks
Will love destroy this long-lost boy
and the freedom that he seeks
For 'twas love, towards his dove
that finally drove him mad
Just thinking of her high above
and the passion that they had
In his head she's not dead
They're together somehow, some way
She always said to look ahead
not dwell on yesterday
It was she who could see
his problem growing bigger
It was he who then would flee
after he squeezed the trigger
Alcohol made him fall
to the very depths of hell
He lost it all behind that wall
Screams of silence in his cell
Crying slurred, teardrops blurred
the mime drops to one knee
He clenched God's Word, his prayer heard
though shackled, he's finally free |
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Lora SITE ADMINISTRATOR
Posts : 5907 Age : 53 Join date : 2011-07-26 Location : Southern CA
| Subject: Re: Screams of silence Sun Nov 06, 2011 1:03 pm | |
| That was deep, just like most of your work. You are such a great poet! Love these lines:
Alcohol made him fall
to the very depths of hell
He lost it all behind that wall
Screams of silence in his cell
Crying slurred, teardrops blurred
the mime drops to one knee
He clenched God's Word, his prayer heard
though shackled, he's finally free |
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oneagleswings ADMIN II
CCW GOLD MEMBER CCW SUPPORTER 2X POETRY CONTEST WINNER Posts : 4323 Age : 64 Join date : 2011-08-30 Location : south carolina
| Subject: Re: Screams of silence Sun Nov 06, 2011 1:17 pm | |
| C'mon Brotha' I needed that bucket of ice cold water dumped on me, your poetry strikes a deep chord with me, I appreciate you, treasure you and Love how the the Spirit reveals himself through you.
God Bless you, and those prayers are sent as promised and will be continuous. |
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oneagleswings ADMIN II
CCW GOLD MEMBER CCW SUPPORTER 2X POETRY CONTEST WINNER Posts : 4323 Age : 64 Join date : 2011-08-30 Location : south carolina
| Subject: Re: Screams of silence Sat Mar 12, 2016 4:38 am | |
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rhymarhyma WRITERS’ MENTOR (500 + posts)
Posts : 549 Join date : 2011-08-11 Location : Denver, CO
| Subject: Re: Screams of silence Sun Mar 13, 2016 3:11 pm | |
| Anthony! What's up, my brotha? Guess what? My kids mother was just in South Carolina. Aiken, to be exact. She said it was absolutely gorgeous out there. I thought of you and yours when she told me. So what's up? Are we gonna write, or what? |
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