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Lori Mitchell
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PostSubject: Getting It Together   Getting It Together EmptyThu Jul 07, 2016 9:16 pm
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Trying to get it together
But alone I am vanquished
I implore to the Almighty
For grace-filled wisdom
That’s cultivated in a servant’s heart

My soul’s desire
Is for a steadfast fervor to grow
My heart to ache for the lost
And joy to supply my days
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PostSubject: Re: Getting It Together   Getting It Together EmptyFri Jul 08, 2016 5:44 am
Short and sweet, conversational, relational, reads like a psalm.
"Vanquished" good choice of word, has power!
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PostSubject: Re: Getting It Together   Getting It Together EmptySun Jul 10, 2016 11:09 am
Beautiful! Don't know how many times I've prayed a similar prayer.
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