My first masterpiece

Uncontrolable right now.
These words are beautiful.
This...is beautiful, this is right.
We,
You and I
This paper

This! Is my clarity!
Behold our beauty en masse!
His infinite words deluge my conciousness.
This was his divine delineation all along.
Impossible for I to fathom afore!
All the while my soul, a undiscerning infant.

At last a succint eternity of your presence.
I could talk to you;
this paper, this ink.
For this paper lone can tell thy beauty.

Once a prisoner of anticipation.
I always felt I would aquire the right words.
Behold...my sacred writings:

I am his masterpeice!
It is glorious!
Abundunt!
It is conscientious!

Finally! I absolve my congested soul!
The truest artistry my unruly tounge has ever uttered.
It is he.
He who commenced this bond.
It was not by accident that I found love.

These words dear God take as much as you can from me.
In this dream-like breath I am in sync.
Will this knowledge abide my novice soul?

Amaurotic beasts will see,
we, the progeny of an infallible God,
prevail an iniquitous world.
The aphorism of it, is to transcend deception.

I am so happy to see your first masterpiece back. It is beautiful. Each line makes the reader pause and think. It is a welcome addition to this site. Thank you!

Thank you so much.

Yay! Glad you re-posted this one. Beautiful.

I LOVE YOUR WIDE USE OF VOCABULARY. I AM ALSO ONE FOR CREATING MORE THAN ONE PICTURE IN A POEM, OR A DOUBLE MEANING METAPHOR. YOU'RE AWESOME.

The word of God is a powerful gift to give. Imagine the divinity the writers of scripture must have felt. May your pen continue to flow with His guidance and inspiration.

wow oneagleswings....that was very inspirational. just wow.

Wow everyone thank you.

I want my work to be a puzzle. I want every child and adult to put each peice together and find it`s meaning.

How wonderful to be in on the sharing of your first masterpieces!

I went back a few days ago to a notebook of poetry I had written years ago and it brought back such memories. Be sure to save all of your masterpieces, even the ones that you don't like as much as others. Sometimes those are not written for us but for someone else. It may be just what they needed to hear.

I plan to have all of my works heard by the world. I have no doubt in my mind that they will be.

Reading this work makes me feel like a stumbling, bumbler. You know, two left feet and I just poked myself in the eye with my own thumb. What a piece.

I revise this thing everytime I read it. Its never good enough.

Just do one thing. That is never revise a masterpiece. Just take what you thought to change and start another. Some of my best have happended that way. Not that my best is ever good enough for me, but if God gives me the words, I'm gonna print them. Never ever let your talent fall by the wayside. I did. Big mistake. Let the world know you are there and let them learn by what you write. Someone out there needed what you had to say. ME!

Wow thank you so much. How do I get the world to hear me though?

I will be sure to do that. Thank you :)

Hmmm, crystalleek on an open mic.? I can picture that. Your work lends itself to it quite well.

I don't think I could.

Have you ever been to one? You never know until you experience it.

I have thought long and hard of making this into two segments.

I wish everyone felt so. thank you

Peace and blessings to you. May He always inspire you.

Thank you very much, and may he be with you as well.