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cleo574
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PostSubject: HIDDEN LOVE   HIDDEN LOVE EmptyMon Oct 03, 2011 7:48 am

HIDDEN LOVE
By Jan Phillips

Your arms hold so tender
Your thoughts are so sweet
It makes me feel safe
Whenever we meet
Your shoulders show courage
Your lips taste of desire
When I’m close to you
My blood turns to liquid fire
I think of you
Each hour of the day
With thoughts of special love
Though why I cannot say
I guess its because
In every way
You are the light of my life
And the ending of my day
Your respect and admiration
Is all that I require
But to be the love of your life
Is what I desire
If ever I lose you
My body may not die
But the sun will be behind a cloud
And the heavens will cry
My heart will still beat
With a love that will not die
In a body filled with sorrow
And thoughts that cannot lie
For I have loved you always
With everything I had
Some people think this love is wrong
I cannot believe its bad
Without you
My life would be bare
Although the memories I have
Will always be there
So give me some hope
That your love shall be mine
And together we’ll walk
Until the end of time

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PostSubject: Re: HIDDEN LOVE   HIDDEN LOVE EmptyMon Oct 03, 2011 9:48 am

This is such a beautiful piece you wrote, the depth of love is so strong. Makes me almost taste it myself because of your words. There's nothing more wonderful than love, true and beautiful love.
Well written. Big Smile
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PostSubject: Re: HIDDEN LOVE   HIDDEN LOVE EmptyMon Oct 03, 2011 12:08 pm

I do believe I see a difference in your work lately. I love it. You are really getting the creative juices flowing. Great job.
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PostSubject: Re: HIDDEN LOVE   HIDDEN LOVE EmptySun Oct 09, 2011 7:16 pm

I like this one. This is how I felt when I was married but could not express it to my husband at the time. And it makes me think about the one true special man that I would hope to have in my life. sweet very sweet.
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PostSubject: Re: HIDDEN LOVE   HIDDEN LOVE EmptySun Oct 09, 2011 7:16 pm

I like this one. This is how I felt when I was married but could not express it to my husband at the time. And it makes me think about the one true special man that I would hope to have in my life. sweet very sweet.
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