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PostSubject: Chained No Longer    Chained No Longer  EmptySat May 05, 2018 3:41 am

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PostSubject: Re: Chained No Longer    Chained No Longer  EmptySun May 06, 2018 6:30 pm

I really like the way you chose to present this...lends more credibility, intimacy and authenticity to see it actually hand written almost like someone is looking over your shoulder and we see it through that perspective? Nicely done!
Even the editing shows that you tweeked this and thought it through it still shows the imprint of the erasures if you look closely...very genuine!
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