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 |  Subject: Living, Loving, and Life Sun Oct 30, 2011 3:02 pm | |
| Hear me when I cry, watch me as I try, help me when I sigh, take me when I die.
Love me while I'm here, hold tight as something dear, don't leave please stay near, lead me through my tears.
See me when I'm strong, correct me when I'm wrong, walk with me all day long, peace is my grateful song. |
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Thena
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| | Subject: Re: Living, Loving, and Life Sun Oct 30, 2011 3:20 pm | |
| I like it. Direct and to the point. |
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Lora
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| | Subject: Re: Living, Loving, and Life Sun Oct 30, 2011 3:24 pm | |
| Awesome work. You were able to portray some very strong feelings very successfully. Love it. |
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| | Subject: Re: Living, Loving, and Life Sun Dec 25, 2011 11:39 pm | |
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