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 Everyone needs a Friend Like You

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PostSubject: Everyone needs a Friend Like You   Everyone needs a Friend Like You EmptySat Nov 05, 2011 2:52 pm

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Everyone needs a Friend Like You

Every time I think about
The things we love to do
I think about the fun I’ve had
In having a friend like you

We have laughed together-
Laughed until we’ve cried-
And we’ve been sad together
Over loved ones who have died.

We have gone on trips together-
Figured out how much to tip together-
And if we had been younger-
We would have done somersaults and flips together!

But since we are getting older
There are certain things we can’t do
But everyday I’m proud to say
Everyone needs a friend like you!

Thena


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PostSubject: Re: Everyone needs a Friend Like You   Everyone needs a Friend Like You EmptySat Nov 05, 2011 2:54 pm

What is cool is when hubbies are friends together too. I have been blessed with friends who have been married a long time and who enjoy each other's company.
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PostSubject: Re: Everyone needs a Friend Like You   Everyone needs a Friend Like You EmptySat Nov 05, 2011 2:58 pm

That is a double blessing and much to cherish. Love this stanza:

We have gone on trips together-
Figured out how much to tip together-
And if we had been younger-
We would have done somersaults and flips together!

P.S. I found a typo you might like to know about:
And we’ve been said together
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PostSubject: Re: Everyone needs a Friend Like You   Everyone needs a Friend Like You EmptySat Nov 05, 2011 3:02 pm

Ohhhh, thank you! I had to recopy it because I could not find the high res copy.
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PostSubject: Re: Everyone needs a Friend Like You   Everyone needs a Friend Like You EmptySat Nov 05, 2011 4:14 pm

This is so nicely put together, all your sentiments are always sweet but combining them with the art is very impactful.
God Bless,

check your p.m. inbox for the piece I wrote, see if it meets with your approval...it's up to you I would in no way take offense if you say no.
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PostSubject: Re: Everyone needs a Friend Like You   Everyone needs a Friend Like You EmptySat Nov 05, 2011 4:23 pm

As usual it is sweet and touching. You are so special.
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PostSubject: Re: Everyone needs a Friend Like You   Everyone needs a Friend Like You EmptySat Nov 05, 2011 4:32 pm

LOL I checked my inbox and I admit it took me by surprise.

Lora is the one you should run it by. I would think one use of the term in the way you used it would have a more dramatic effect and it may be one suitable for family ...

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PostSubject: Re: Everyone needs a Friend Like You   Everyone needs a Friend Like You EmptySat Nov 05, 2011 4:37 pm

What did you think?
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PostSubject: Re: Everyone needs a Friend Like You   Everyone needs a Friend Like You EmptySat Nov 05, 2011 4:41 pm

I think it may be a bit "too fraught"....LOL


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PostSubject: Re: Everyone needs a Friend Like You   Everyone needs a Friend Like You EmptySat Nov 05, 2011 4:53 pm

I know my fraughting can really annoy my husband when done in a small room with little ventilation. LOL
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PostSubject: Re: Everyone needs a Friend Like You   Everyone needs a Friend Like You EmptySun Nov 06, 2011 12:27 am

Nice play on words there Miss Lora. Ever thought about writing poems?
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PostSubject: Re: Everyone needs a Friend Like You   Everyone needs a Friend Like You EmptySun Nov 06, 2011 1:26 am

Awe, thank you Miss Cleo, but I can't take the credit for that one. Oneagleswings was the mastermind behind the word play. He can be so witty and funny.

As much I read poetry, I have been tempted to write it. I'm not sure why, but I actually feel a little frightened to attempt it. Maybe there's a little self doubt hidden in there. I did write a poem for my son once using all of his spelling words. It was fun.
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