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Thena ADMIN II
CCW GOLD MEMBER CCW SUPPORTER POETRY & SHORT STORY CONTESTS WINNER Posts : 2875 Age : 79 Join date : 2011-09-11 Location : Sunny CA
| Subject: Everyone needs a Friend Like You Sat Nov 05, 2011 2:52 pm | |
| Everyone needs a Friend Like You Every time I think about The things we love to do I think about the fun I’ve had In having a friend like you We have laughed together- Laughed until we’ve cried- And we’ve been sad together Over loved ones who have died. We have gone on trips together- Figured out how much to tip together- And if we had been younger- We would have done somersaults and flips together! But since we are getting older There are certain things we can’t do But everyday I’m proud to say Everyone needs a friend like you! Thena
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Thena ADMIN II
CCW GOLD MEMBER CCW SUPPORTER POETRY & SHORT STORY CONTESTS WINNER Posts : 2875 Age : 79 Join date : 2011-09-11 Location : Sunny CA
| Subject: Re: Everyone needs a Friend Like You Sat Nov 05, 2011 2:54 pm | |
| What is cool is when hubbies are friends together too. I have been blessed with friends who have been married a long time and who enjoy each other's company. |
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Lora SITE ADMINISTRATOR
Posts : 5907 Age : 53 Join date : 2011-07-26 Location : Southern CA
| Subject: Re: Everyone needs a Friend Like You Sat Nov 05, 2011 2:58 pm | |
| That is a double blessing and much to cherish. Love this stanza:
We have gone on trips together- Figured out how much to tip together- And if we had been younger- We would have done somersaults and flips together!
P.S. I found a typo you might like to know about: And we’ve been said together |
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Thena ADMIN II
CCW GOLD MEMBER CCW SUPPORTER POETRY & SHORT STORY CONTESTS WINNER Posts : 2875 Age : 79 Join date : 2011-09-11 Location : Sunny CA
| Subject: Re: Everyone needs a Friend Like You Sat Nov 05, 2011 3:02 pm | |
| Ohhhh, thank you! I had to recopy it because I could not find the high res copy. |
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oneagleswings ADMIN II
CCW GOLD MEMBER CCW SUPPORTER 2X POETRY CONTEST WINNER Posts : 4323 Age : 64 Join date : 2011-08-30 Location : south carolina
| Subject: Re: Everyone needs a Friend Like You Sat Nov 05, 2011 4:14 pm | |
| This is so nicely put together, all your sentiments are always sweet but combining them with the art is very impactful. God Bless,
check your p.m. inbox for the piece I wrote, see if it meets with your approval...it's up to you I would in no way take offense if you say no. |
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cleo574 WRITERS’ MENTOR (500 + posts)
CCW GOLD MEMBER Posts : 542 Age : 77 Join date : 2011-08-18 Location : Oklahoma City, Oklahoma
| Subject: Re: Everyone needs a Friend Like You Sat Nov 05, 2011 4:23 pm | |
| As usual it is sweet and touching. You are so special. |
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Thena ADMIN II
CCW GOLD MEMBER CCW SUPPORTER POETRY & SHORT STORY CONTESTS WINNER Posts : 2875 Age : 79 Join date : 2011-09-11 Location : Sunny CA
| Subject: Re: Everyone needs a Friend Like You Sat Nov 05, 2011 4:32 pm | |
| LOL I checked my inbox and I admit it took me by surprise.
Lora is the one you should run it by. I would think one use of the term in the way you used it would have a more dramatic effect and it may be one suitable for family ...
Hugs |
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oneagleswings ADMIN II
CCW GOLD MEMBER CCW SUPPORTER 2X POETRY CONTEST WINNER Posts : 4323 Age : 64 Join date : 2011-08-30 Location : south carolina
| Subject: Re: Everyone needs a Friend Like You Sat Nov 05, 2011 4:37 pm | |
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Thena ADMIN II
CCW GOLD MEMBER CCW SUPPORTER POETRY & SHORT STORY CONTESTS WINNER Posts : 2875 Age : 79 Join date : 2011-09-11 Location : Sunny CA
| Subject: Re: Everyone needs a Friend Like You Sat Nov 05, 2011 4:41 pm | |
| I think it may be a bit "too fraught"....LOL
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Lora SITE ADMINISTRATOR
Posts : 5907 Age : 53 Join date : 2011-07-26 Location : Southern CA
| Subject: Re: Everyone needs a Friend Like You Sat Nov 05, 2011 4:53 pm | |
| I know my fraughting can really annoy my husband when done in a small room with little ventilation. LOL |
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cleo574 WRITERS’ MENTOR (500 + posts)
CCW GOLD MEMBER Posts : 542 Age : 77 Join date : 2011-08-18 Location : Oklahoma City, Oklahoma
| Subject: Re: Everyone needs a Friend Like You Sun Nov 06, 2011 12:27 am | |
| Nice play on words there Miss Lora. Ever thought about writing poems? |
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Lora SITE ADMINISTRATOR
Posts : 5907 Age : 53 Join date : 2011-07-26 Location : Southern CA
| Subject: Re: Everyone needs a Friend Like You Sun Nov 06, 2011 1:26 am | |
| Awe, thank you Miss Cleo, but I can't take the credit for that one. Oneagleswings was the mastermind behind the word play. He can be so witty and funny.
As much I read poetry, I have been tempted to write it. I'm not sure why, but I actually feel a little frightened to attempt it. Maybe there's a little self doubt hidden in there. I did write a poem for my son once using all of his spelling words. It was fun. |
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