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 The Good News in Ripples

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PostSubject: The Good News in Ripples   The Good News in Ripples EmptyThu Dec 22, 2011 9:25 am

Mud bred nymph waves goodbye
and creeps up a lily stem
into the light
promises to return
if the rumors are true...
if there really is
a promised land
up there

Above the shimmer her wings unfurl
with lotus petals
Fresh sunlight whispers
a higher calling
inconceivable
down there

Dragonflies keep trying to explain
nonetheless
in surface tension
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PostSubject: Re: The Good News in Ripples   The Good News in Ripples EmptyThu Dec 22, 2011 3:48 pm

I love the visual descriptions you included. Nice work.
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