hineimatov APPRENTICE (6-25 posts)
POETRY CONTEST WINNER Posts : 10 Age : 69 Join date : 2011-12-21 Location : Johannesburg, South Africa
| Subject: The Good News in Ripples Thu Dec 22, 2011 9:25 am | |
| Mud bred nymph waves goodbye and creeps up a lily stem into the light promises to return if the rumors are true... if there really is a promised land up there
Above the shimmer her wings unfurl with lotus petals Fresh sunlight whispers a higher calling inconceivable down there
Dragonflies keep trying to explain nonetheless in surface tension |
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Lora SITE ADMINISTRATOR
Posts : 5907 Age : 53 Join date : 2011-07-26 Location : Southern CA
| Subject: Re: The Good News in Ripples Thu Dec 22, 2011 3:48 pm | |
| I love the visual descriptions you included. Nice work. |
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