cleo574 WRITERS’ MENTOR (500 + posts)
CCW GOLD MEMBER Posts : 542 Age : 77 Join date : 2011-08-18 Location : Oklahoma City, Oklahoma
| Subject: Gone to Heaven Sat Dec 24, 2011 2:55 am | |
| By Jan Phillips My friend has gone to Heaven There to wait for me I hope He saves a real good place For me to spend eternity. He’s been gone a long, long time I hope He still remembers me I am the one longing to be free To soar high above the earth with angels wings. My friend is my Savior He came back once before Now He lives in Heaven But He will be back once more He was God’s only son who was sent to Earth before To save mankind from his sin This time He will stay a while and reign as King of Kings And we will live along side Him and sing the songs He sings His mother’s name was Mary but His father’s name was God Mary was the wife of Joseph who was a carpenter Jesus was the Holy Spirit sent from Heaven above To die upon the cross so that all of us may live He had to go back to Heaven There to wait for us When God gives the signal He’ll come back again and take us home with Him. In Heaven there are many mansions One of which is mine Which one it will be I will know in time. He promised to prepare a place for me And I believe His word It’s written in the Holy Bible He has spoken and I have heard. I’m waiting now to leave I don’t think it will be too long I will be with my Savior Right where I belong. |
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oneagleswings ADMIN II
CCW GOLD MEMBER CCW SUPPORTER 2X POETRY CONTEST WINNER Posts : 4323 Age : 64 Join date : 2011-08-30 Location : south carolina
| Subject: Re: Gone to Heaven Sat Dec 24, 2011 3:29 am | |
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Thena ADMIN II
CCW GOLD MEMBER CCW SUPPORTER POETRY & SHORT STORY CONTESTS WINNER Posts : 2875 Age : 79 Join date : 2011-09-11 Location : Sunny CA
| Subject: Re: Gone to Heaven Sat Dec 24, 2011 9:44 am | |
| Maybe we will be neighbors!
Love you bunches! |
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cleo574 WRITERS’ MENTOR (500 + posts)
CCW GOLD MEMBER Posts : 542 Age : 77 Join date : 2011-08-18 Location : Oklahoma City, Oklahoma
| Subject: Re: Gone to Heaven Sat Dec 24, 2011 9:49 am | |
| Love you guys bunches too and I hope we are neighbors. Hope you have a very happy and peaceful Christmas. |
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Lora SITE ADMINISTRATOR
Posts : 5907 Age : 53 Join date : 2011-07-26 Location : Southern CA
| Subject: Re: Gone to Heaven Mon Dec 26, 2011 11:09 pm | |
| Love the way you're mixing it up now. The mingling of free verse and rhyme is a nice touch. I also love the little surprise in the message. I thought this was going to be an elegy to one that was lost. Instead, it was a joyful message of what is to come. Great work! |
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oneagleswings ADMIN II
CCW GOLD MEMBER CCW SUPPORTER 2X POETRY CONTEST WINNER Posts : 4323 Age : 64 Join date : 2011-08-30 Location : south carolina
| Subject: Re: Gone to Heaven Sat Jan 14, 2012 8:36 pm | |
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