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PostSubject: Solstice   Solstice EmptySun Dec 25, 2011 5:48 am

Solstice
By Scott Newport

When the weight of
Christmas morning-
Falls, the chill
Begins

Begins to fill
Those empty souls
Others become
The emptied on

The one missing
No present
No presence
Lost to the decider

One decision
I detest-
And everyday
In between
The solstice of
Death

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PostSubject: Re: Solstice   Solstice EmptySun Dec 25, 2011 5:58 am

very powerful...btw,
i noticed that (center) appears at the "bottom left"
did you intend this to be centered?


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PostSubject: Re: Solstice   Solstice EmptySun Dec 25, 2011 8:56 am

Yes, I was trying to center the document. Guess what I tried didnt work. Maybe next time.
Thanks for asking

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PostSubject: Re: Solstice   Solstice EmptySun Dec 25, 2011 9:15 am

just highlight then hit center,
you're very welcome.
also...try previewing to see before posting.
you can always use the edit feature too !
would you like me to center it for you?
it's no trouble would be glad to.

also...in the title
did you mean to write "soltice"or "solstice?"
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PostSubject: Re: Solstice   Solstice EmptySun Dec 25, 2011 12:22 pm

Thanks for the help. The site has been a bit getting use to. Yes if you could center this that would be great.

Here is the edited version.



Solstice
By Scott Newport

When the weight of
Christmas morning-
Falls, the chill
Begins

Begins to fill
Those empty souls
Others become
The emptied on

The one missing
No present
No presence
Lost to the decider

One decision
I detest-
And everyday
In between
The solstice of
Death


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PostSubject: Re: Solstice   Solstice EmptySun Dec 25, 2011 3:14 pm

done:)
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PostSubject: Re: Solstice   Solstice EmptyMon Dec 26, 2011 10:41 pm

That was very moving. It makes one feel empty and melancholy. I love your work. It's very powerful. I can't wait to read more.
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