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LoriV
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PostSubject: Natures Praise   Natures Praise EmptyTue Mar 13, 2012 2:58 pm

Trees sway their barky limbs
In wispy wind leaves twirl
Clear twinkling flowing stream
moving in slow curves past
sticks and stones and braided roots
Bright yellow buttercups bouncing
in watery ripples
Stony weedy watery bed
Reflecting sunny rays in a
choreography of praise.

Lori Visser
Unpublished work©2012
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PostSubject: Re: Natures Praise   Natures Praise EmptyTue Mar 13, 2012 3:07 pm
Can close my eyes and see it.
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PostSubject: Re: Natures Praise   Natures Praise EmptySun Mar 18, 2012 2:20 pm
Wow, that's beautiful. I can almost see and feel all of that. Awesome, awesome work!
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PostSubject: Re: Natures Praise   Natures Praise EmptyTue Mar 20, 2012 8:05 pm
Thank you girlses! I thought that writing a non-rhymer would be hard. Nope, just closed my eyes (in the dermatologist's waiting room) and wrote what I wished to see.
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PostSubject: Re: Natures Praise   Natures Praise EmptyTue Mar 20, 2012 8:50 pm
I can't wait to see more of it!
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