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Take My Life Empty
PostSubject: Take My Life   Take My Life EmptyFri Sep 14, 2012 11:14 am
Falling on my knees
Before you, my Lord
I give my life
To do with what you will

I am done
With living for myself
I am ready
To live for you

No more broken promises
No more empty words
No more fooling myself
No more painful tears

Take my life
I’m laying it down
At the cross
Where the lost are found
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PostSubject: Re: Take My Life   Take My Life EmptyFri Sep 14, 2012 12:17 pm
I love your style. Beautiful. I especially love the last stanza:

Take my life
I’m laying it down
At the cross
Where the lost are found
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PostSubject: Re: Take My Life   Take My Life EmptySat Sep 15, 2012 1:24 pm
Bold, sweet and simple. Love it!
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PostSubject: Re: Take My Life   Take My Life EmptySun Sep 16, 2012 6:09 am
"No more broken promises
No more empty words
No more fooling myself
No more painful tears

Take my life
I’m laying it down
At the cross
Where the lost are found"

You also picked up a cross and a new walk, God Bless.
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PostSubject: Re: Take My Life   Take My Life EmptyMon Sep 17, 2012 11:45 am
Thank you guys :)
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PostSubject: Re: Take My Life   Take My Life EmptyMon Sep 17, 2012 1:15 pm
Love the last verse especially
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