Christian Creative Writers

A FREE CHRISTIAN WRITERS' FORUM
 
HomeHome  PortalPortal  PublicationsPublications  SearchSearch  Latest imagesLatest images  RegisterRegister  Log in  SpotlightSpotlight  JesusJesus  
NO REGISTRATION**FEEL FREE TO COMMENT AS A GUEST**NO REGISTRATION**POST YOUR POETRY OR STORIES AS A GUEST**NO REGISTRATION**WRITERS RESOURCES**NO REGISTRATION**CHRISTIAN DISCUSSION**NO REGISTRATION**GREAT WRITING TIPS**

 :: CHRISTIAN WRITERS' FORUM :: PoetryShare
 

 Modern Church

View previous topic View next topic Go down 
AuthorMessage
Malakhim
WRITER (51-100 posts)
WRITER (51-100 posts)
Malakhim

2x POETRY CONTEST WINNER 2X POETRY CONTEST WINNER
Posts : 75
Age : 30
Join date : 2012-08-25
Location : Texas

Modern Church Empty
PostSubject: Modern Church   Modern Church EmptyWed Oct 24, 2012 3:05 pm
We're sailing on shallow seas of hypothetical integrity
practicing piety to grow closer to a deity who isn't near you and me
This isn't how it should be
Step out of the boat and walk on water with me
Faithfully
Honestly, Gods closer than you and I think
In fact He's living in me!
Is He living in you?
You've spent all your years jealous for God
but wouldn't you believe that He's jealous for you!
Back to top Go down
rhymarhyma
WRITERS’ MENTOR (500 + posts)
WRITERS’ MENTOR (500 + posts)
rhymarhyma

Posts : 549
Join date : 2011-08-11
Location : Denver, CO

Modern Church Empty
PostSubject: Re: Modern Church   Modern Church EmptyFri Oct 26, 2012 9:36 am
A lot of thought from so few words. Great poem. No doubt.
Back to top Go down
oneagleswings
ADMIN II
ADMIN II
oneagleswings

CCW GOLD MEMBER CCW GOLD MEMBER
CCW SUPPORTER CCW SUPPORTER
2x POETRY CONTEST WINNER 2X POETRY CONTEST WINNER
Posts : 4323
Age : 64
Join date : 2011-08-30
Location : south carolina

Modern Church Empty
PostSubject: Re: Modern Church   Modern Church EmptyFri Oct 26, 2012 2:16 pm
Nice to see you back on...delighted!
Back to top Go down
Lora
SITE ADMINISTRATOR
SITE ADMINISTRATOR
Lora

Posts : 5907
Age : 53
Join date : 2011-07-26
Location : Southern CA

Modern Church Empty
PostSubject: Re: Modern Church   Modern Church EmptySat Oct 27, 2012 10:56 am
Love the call brother! Keep preaching it. Very nice work. You kicked off the poem very nicely. I especially love the first two lines:

We're sailing on shallow seas of hypothetical integrity
practicing piety to grow closer to a deity who isn't near you and me
Back to top Go down
http://loraconnor.com
Sponsored content




Modern Church Empty
PostSubject: Re: Modern Church   Modern Church Empty
Back to top Go down
 
Modern Church
View previous topic View next topic Back to top 
Share this topic...
Link this topic
URL:
BBCode:
HTML:
Page 1 of 1

Permissions in this forum:You cannot reply to topics in this forum
Christian Creative Writers :: CHRISTIAN WRITERS' FORUM :: Poetry-