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Posts : 69 Age : 73 Join date : 2012-08-25 Location : KANSAS
Subject: GENESIS Mon Dec 31, 2012 6:25 pm
A flower called the rose Muti-petaled growing alone
Eve called it ~~ oh her own She plucked the flower deepest red She placed it on Adams body scarred From whence the rib twas skin marred Adam slept on while tear after tear fell For Eve cried knowing of his sacrifice Now she had sinned they would suffer twice Before the rose so beautiful and red She plucked from the tree that God had said “Ye shall not eat of it….lest ye die” Serpent told Eve “Tis but a lie” She plucked and took a bite To Adam she said ‘taste tis good and ripe’ As the serpent slipped amongst the trees A murmur from the path they did hear A sorrowful echoing haunting sound For God was weeping diamond drop tears He cursed the serpent to the dust Covered mankind toe to bust Declared labour to a childs birth Bringing thorns and thistles to earth He cried out to them in pain His tears washing like a rain Driving them from Paradise To till the ground from which he was taken.
Lora SITE ADMINISTRATOR
Posts : 5907 Age : 53 Join date : 2011-07-26 Location : Southern CA
Subject: Re: GENESIS Sun Jan 13, 2013 10:47 am
Beautiful. It's not often I see something done on Adam and Eve, but I think this is one of the better ones that I've seen. Great work!
Len Williams Carver WRITER (51-100 posts)
Posts : 69 Age : 73 Join date : 2012-08-25 Location : KANSAS
Subject: Re: GENESIS Sun Jan 13, 2013 10:58 am
Thank you Lora, starting the new year with reading/ studying my Bible through in a year (4th yr in a row) and of course Matthew and Genesis come to mind for that. thank you again for beautiful comment. God Bless and keep you , Len