Doug Blair ADMIN II
CCW GOLD MEMBER POETRY CONTEST WINNER Posts : 644 Age : 73 Join date : 2013-02-03 Location : Waterloo, Ontario, Canada
| Subject: The Crumbling Clan Mon Feb 04, 2013 3:22 am | |
| The Crumbling Clan
I can tell you how He helped me. I can tell you what He said. I consider each day gifted. I have lost my greatest dread.
I embrace a broader family. I have dropped my trust in self. I am focused on the treasure, That transcends all earthly wealth.
I would love to take you with me On this Christ-embracing trek; But I know just how the Spirit First must leave your plans a wreck.
And the brokenness He looks for Seems a weakling’s lot to you. And that list of natural talents, He will, every one, subdue.
It must rate a poor investment While the game is still at hand, And the friends still pull the levers, And your house seems sure to stand.
But if Love once grabs the heart strings And reveals the Cross in power, You may join the clan whose crumbling Has become their finest hour.
Are you sure that it won’t happen? That this Gospel is a lie? Comes to mind another breaking, But the rebel, then, was I.
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Lora SITE ADMINISTRATOR
Posts : 5907 Age : 53 Join date : 2011-07-26 Location : Southern CA
| Subject: Re: The Crumbling Clan Mon Feb 25, 2013 11:20 pm | |
| Love this one. It starts strong and ends strong. |
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Thena ADMIN II
CCW GOLD MEMBER CCW SUPPORTER POETRY & SHORT STORY CONTESTS WINNER Posts : 2875 Age : 79 Join date : 2011-09-11 Location : Sunny CA
| Subject: Re: The Crumbling Clan Tue Feb 26, 2013 1:40 pm | |
| Really really like this one. |
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vinedresser WORDSMITH (251-300 posts)
Posts : 259 Age : 68 Join date : 2011-10-10 Location : Arkansas
| Subject: Re: The Crumbling Clan Sat Mar 09, 2013 8:10 pm | |
| A really good read, enjoyed then flow. One thing a bit troubling to me is the statement, "And that list of natural talents, He will, every one, subdue". Am I to understand that if I still have some of those talents, that there is something wrong with my walk before Him? |
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Doug Blair ADMIN II
CCW GOLD MEMBER POETRY CONTEST WINNER Posts : 644 Age : 73 Join date : 2013-02-03 Location : Waterloo, Ontario, Canada
| Subject: Re: The Crumbling Clan Sun Mar 10, 2013 12:13 am | |
| Carl: Consider Philippians 3: 7,8. We have seen how God may employ a natural pre-disposition to His glory The gift came from Him in the first place...But if we take any self-assurance from the talent, we may have to be chastened. All bows to the sovereignty of Jesus, and awaits His marching orders.
It was not my intention to suggest that the gift must be annihilated, only surrendered.
http://momentsmidstream.blogspot.ca/2010/04/take-now-thy-son.html |
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