rhymarhyma WRITERS’ MENTOR (500 + posts)
Posts : 549 Join date : 2011-08-11 Location : Denver, CO
| Subject: A whisper of your name Sat Apr 06, 2013 4:30 pm | |
| My actions are eternal, I can't make 'em go away
and "I'm sorry" doesn't change the pain I caused you yesterday
but my words also live forever, so please believe me when I say
I love you, I love you, I love you today...
It's another sunny day in the 303
I'm gonna fly a mile high and let my spirit be free
Today's the only day that I'm promised to live
and I tell you right now, there's nothing I wouldn't give
to put a smile on your face and a song in your heart
'cause when we're holding hands together I know we'll never be apart
I started this rhyme with you in mind
and if I look inside myself it isn't hard to find
a vision of your beauty, a whisper of your name
moment by moment, life is never the same
Love grows bigger...faster...stronger
until my heart overloads and can't take it any longer
The brilliance of your love I can't even comprehend
but I'm so glad that I asked you to be more than a friend
Independently codependent, without your love I cannot thrive
Without you in my life I can't survive, I'm not alive
I live because of you, and that is nothing less than fact
and I pray loving you back is my final earthly act...
The blood of your love on my fingertips
offering grace as each drop drips
A celestial, heavenly, physical eclipse
as your name, dearest Jesus, whispers off my lips... |
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Thena ADMIN II
CCW GOLD MEMBER CCW SUPPORTER POETRY & SHORT STORY CONTESTS WINNER Posts : 2875 Age : 79 Join date : 2011-09-11 Location : Sunny CA
| Subject: Re: A whisper of your name Tue Apr 09, 2013 10:56 am | |
| The ending made me teary. Just suddenly out of my heart, tears at the thought of that sweet and precious Name above all Names.
Love this one especially! |
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