rhymarhyma WRITERS’ MENTOR (500 + posts)
Posts : 549 Join date : 2011-08-11 Location : Denver, CO
| Subject: I hurt Tue Apr 09, 2013 3:36 pm | |
| The contrast between being sober and being high?
I never had to feel the tears other people cry...
I hurt...not for myself, but for others
Today I felt the pain amongst sisters and brothers
as a father and mother buried their daughter today
and for the first time in my life, I didn't know what to say
No joke or anecdote, no humorous remark
would ever shine the light in a room so dark
I was out of my element, I could bring no illumination
because up until today I've been in every situation
The ones people bring to me, to share and confide
but I've never had a child pass to the other side
So I cried...because that little girl was gone
and I realized sometimes maybe there is no dawn
Maybe not every dark cloud has a silver lining
because who could replace the light if one of my sunshine's stopped shining
If one of my flower's stopped blossoming, nevermore to bloom
could I ever step out from my dark, enclosed room
I've experienced a great amount of pain, so much it seems surreal
but that's the kind of pain I pray I never, ever feel
yet I felt the pain in the tears from a life cut short
Tears of the shocked, confused, unimaginable sort
and it's very easy for me to say "Cry unto the Lord"
"Your daughter is now entering her promised great reward"
because those are my beliefs, my unshakeable views
but would I be so quick to speak if I were in those shoes
Probably not...I'm sure it would take quite awhile
before I could muster up the strength and the courage to smile
Maybe Jesus would lift me within weeks...months...years...
or maybe he would just hold me while he cried my same tears
and if I cried until I died, until I too were set free
I'll know as I mourned for my child, the Lord mourned for me...
I pray for the fallen children, the sons and the daughters
Smile now, forever, amidst the peaceful waters... |
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oneagleswings ADMIN II
CCW GOLD MEMBER CCW SUPPORTER 2X POETRY CONTEST WINNER Posts : 4323 Age : 64 Join date : 2011-08-30 Location : south carolina
| Subject: Re: I hurt Tue Apr 09, 2013 3:54 pm | |
| Brother i am in all kinds of pain today at least i thought i was until i read this... |
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Thena ADMIN II
CCW GOLD MEMBER CCW SUPPORTER POETRY & SHORT STORY CONTESTS WINNER Posts : 2875 Age : 79 Join date : 2011-09-11 Location : Sunny CA
| Subject: Re: I hurt Wed Apr 10, 2013 12:00 pm | |
| Read over and over and over.
God bless you and may He continue to use your words to bless, teach and heal. |
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Lora SITE ADMINISTRATOR
Posts : 5907 Age : 53 Join date : 2011-07-26 Location : Southern CA
| Subject: Re: I hurt Sun Apr 14, 2013 1:05 am | |
| Sniff...there I go again, crying to one of your poems. You have such a talent for reaching deep and touching others. May the Lord bless many others through your work. |
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worshipfreely WRITERS’ MENTOR (500 + posts)
CCW GOLD MEMBER POETRY CONTEST WINNER Posts : 832 Age : 51 Join date : 2011-08-29 Location : Hillsboro OR
| Subject: Re: I hurt Sun Apr 14, 2013 9:01 am | |
| That was an amazing and succinct, empathetic way to paint a very painful and ugly picture, yet you still brought beauty to a an unimaginable situation from a parents perspective. You move me to tears often as well. Thank you for HIS gifts that you share. Praise HIM always, in all ways. |
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Thena ADMIN II
CCW GOLD MEMBER CCW SUPPORTER POETRY & SHORT STORY CONTESTS WINNER Posts : 2875 Age : 79 Join date : 2011-09-11 Location : Sunny CA
| Subject: Re: I hurt Sun Apr 14, 2013 9:21 am | |
| - Quote :
- Maybe Jesus would lift me within weeks...months...years...
or maybe he would just hold me while he cried my same tears
and if I cried until I died, until I too were set free
I'll know as I mourned for my child, the Lord mourned for me... |
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sasq89 NEW KID ON THE BLOCK (0-5 Posts)
Posts : 2 Join date : 2013-04-08
| Subject: Re: I hurt Sun Apr 14, 2013 3:36 pm | |
| Beautiful writing. So moving. |
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rhymarhyma WRITERS’ MENTOR (500 + posts)
Posts : 549 Join date : 2011-08-11 Location : Denver, CO
| Subject: Re: I hurt Sun Apr 14, 2013 4:06 pm | |
| Thanks, guys. I tell you what, out of all the rhymes of my life that I put up here, I wish I'd never had to write this one. No doubt. I know God has a reason, and someday my friends will see that reason, and something beautiful will come out of it. Always, in all ways. Word. |
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