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CCW GOLD MEMBER CCW SUPPORTER 2X POETRY CONTEST WINNER Posts : 4323 Age : 64 Join date : 2011-08-30 Location : south carolina
Subject: Everyone has a glow (with audio) Sun Aug 19, 2012 5:41 am
There are two mourning doves on a wire as we round a bend in the road male and female they seem to wait for us there in the same place always
We are holding hands neighbors smile and wave as we go by all we left behind is as dust all that lay ahead beckons to us
Sing along to a Christian song on the radio the windows are closed we can see the world but it can't get in
I reach to gently stroke her hair she leans into my hand tenderly i whisper:"i love you" she whispers:"i love you more" i say:"i know...(playfully) i love you but i love Him more" she says:"i know, before you knew yourself, i've always known"
Who knows where such outings will end? We are both "out to lunch" literally according to the world she and i are one of a kind be back soon... if it be God's Will if the end of this road lay ahead today well, that's fine too
By a pond we arrive like exuberant children i watch... as geese take bread from her hand "it tickles", she says she is radiant, giddy, over-joyed, light as a feather like a carefree ballerina
through her eyes
unlocked now and freed
though only momentarily His Bliss... is revealed
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Thena ADMIN II
CCW GOLD MEMBER CCW SUPPORTER POETRY & SHORT STORY CONTESTS WINNER Posts : 2875 Age : 79 Join date : 2011-09-11 Location : Sunny CA
Subject: Re: Everyone has a glow (with audio) Sun Aug 19, 2012 1:08 pm
Beautiful! Love it!
Lora SITE ADMINISTRATOR
Posts : 5907 Age : 53 Join date : 2011-07-26 Location : Southern CA
Subject: Re: Everyone has a glow (with audio) Thu Aug 23, 2012 4:41 pm
Wow! You took me away with you on your journey. I love the tenderness, nostalgia, and hopefulness in this one.
oneagleswings ADMIN II
CCW GOLD MEMBER CCW SUPPORTER 2X POETRY CONTEST WINNER Posts : 4323 Age : 64 Join date : 2011-08-30 Location : south carolina
Subject: Re: Everyone has a glow (with audio) Wed Aug 29, 2012 7:12 pm
Like striking a match, a flame glows brightest when it is first lit. Even a dim light...is "light" and can be nothing else. The darker the night, the brighter the light by contrast! A lamp is either lit or unlit.
oneagleswings ADMIN II
CCW GOLD MEMBER CCW SUPPORTER 2X POETRY CONTEST WINNER Posts : 4323 Age : 64 Join date : 2011-08-30 Location : south carolina
Subject: Re: Everyone has a glow (with audio) Tue Nov 07, 2017 9:45 pm